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Fabulouso!!

I read chapter 4 on the day it had been posted, and now (almost 10 days later) it\'s just clicked. Trunks as \'catcher\'...wow. What in the world is going to happened when everyone (Goten) sees Gohan\'s mark on Trunks? And poor Jaia...is she okay? How will Kakkarot react after? Will he have a significant reaction? Oh, and I forgot about Vegeta and Bra! What happened there? Do the human women *ever* find out, even if accidentally? Bulma\'s going to eventually see the mark on Trunks right?

I need more!!! Please? lol

O_O OMG.... YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE

I am th ebiggest fan of Goku Vegeta..... Well okay Im the biggest fan of Saiyan\'s in general and that was just wonderfully writen I have to know what happens.... Keep up the onwderfull work and I\'ll read everything you do ^_^

Oh, my f-ing Goddess! This is one of the few fanfics in which I dig interaction with an original character. I\'m also usually yaoi focused...so the fact that I *like* Kakarrotto\'s Saiyan-baby-making-urges toward a female is *amazing*. When will Trunks or Goten make an appearence? Or will they at all? What\'s going to happen with Jaia? Is Vegeta going to see/meet/stalk/frighten \"this Jaia\"?

I can\'t wait for another installment! Add more soon!

This is so good.....please finish...who will be next...goten/goku? Pan/Trunks?....the possibiltes are endess.....