rate_review Reviews

Ooo.. a lovely piece. I like the maturity and grayness of the emotions here -- Kakarrot isn\'t a dolt and Vegeta isn\'t an insensitive asshole. The pace was good and the scene changes natural.

I absolutely adored this! Angst, love, sex, drama, romance...

SO GOOD.

I really enjoyed your story! It\'s a wonderful piece of work. I\'ve never read any DBZ fanfiction primarily because the series just seemed a little childlike to me; nothing juvenile about your characters. I saw your work recommended in LJ by a writer I respect so I visited. I\'m so glad I did. What I liked best in this piece is the love Goku has for Vegeta that he can\'t bear to name; it runs all through the work and is beautifully understated. So very like a warrior to become comfortable with the exertions of sex well before they give in to love. Thanks for much for publishing this! -- tM

I don\'t know what to say at the moment, except that I am moved and impressed, and glad to see another writer of your caliber. thank you for this.

It\'s a damn good thing you had A/N stating there was going to be a chapter 2 to this. Because, right before I got to that A/N I was thinking, \"Nnnnoooooooooooo!!!!!!! It can\'t end like THAT,/b.

Thank you for the tear jerker warning. I think that was the only thing that stopped me from pulling out the tissues.

Very good chatper. Hope to see more REAL soon.