rate_review Reviews

I really liked this fic. I think in your effort to make it short (if that was your intention) you cut out a lot of the dialogue and certain scenes that would have allowed for better character growth. I think what you need is something more about Wufei, pre-bar or have something explianed about Wufei in the bar and a little more of that first night or per a first week. Jumping to months later left me wondering.

I like the way you write and I could feel all the emotions here. Best of all, I like how you didn\'t go for the usual pairings.

I really liked the way that you didn\'t have Quatre revert back to a sunny and bright guy after he left Tom, and that he kept up his routines and everything - a realistic touch to the fic.
^^ A very nice job, and I really enjoyed reading it!

Wow - all the while reading this i was thinking of Alecia Keys \"Karma\" because that song and this story fit SO WELL together. I loved this - LOVED this. Its like nothing i\'ve ever read before. Its great! I would suggest, though you\'ve already decided, mot to do a sequel or another chapter to this because it ends on such a strained and tense moment where it just *begs* to hold on. So yeah I think this is totally awesome. And go see the music video for \"Karma\" or read the lyrics for it. I think it coincides with this pretty well.

This is a great short story. But why make it a fanfic? Change the names and it could easily stand on it\'s own.

WOW! I liked this fic! I feel like Q-chan sometimes---too old for people my age, and having no idea of what to say to them. RAGH! But I really liked this fic. the voice of it was superb and quite detailing. Excellent fic!