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by Ravensky

person chiptruth
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i didn\'t read it. i am reviewing the idea. i find it a good idea.

duo is so tortured...he stands to me as a symbol in gundam wing for the insanity of christianity -- his togs, his war machine...while rayleena obviously stands for strength and love in the face of denial and government trickery..soobviously that is a passionate argument between twowing characters...basically a good set up there.

now i am thinking about gundam wing, my first intro to the vast gundam universe of characters, storylines and mecha, we both know how INCREDIBLY vast the gundamworld and historues are...i wonder why he is duo?

my suggestion is that it is a pseudonym that he chose and that he has a twin sister. i may sit down and work on that one day.

peace
person Yukiko
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you really missed your story with that.
the beginning was really good, but that last chapter really disapointed me. It\'s really different from your first chapter and I have to say, I hate it.

Still, I\'ve loved the beginning
person Yukiko
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s so hurtfull ..... I means it\'s so ... Relena don\'t love Heero, Heero love Duo and now Duo just heard Heero saying he loved Relena .... Can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person Stone
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i unno the whole torturing sister thing sounds kinda amusing....:P i like it. i\'ll keep it in favs so i can read the next chap. peace ^^V
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm .... torture the sister ....

I love your Relena, I love your fics.

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