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Please continue the story For The Sayen Race and forgive me if I miss spelled something. It is not everyday that I read a fitting story to my liking about Dragon Ball Z and your is just awsome! Thank you for reading.

wen will you finish? are you trying to kill amazed? ( i didn't even write my *code name* in capitals i'm so depressed ). finish friend.
(on a serious note) yours is one of the first stories i read on aff net and i loved it, unfourtunately i thought most of the other stories were as greats as this and was sourly dissapointed. I hope if your tied up on another project that it finishes soon and that your all happy and relaxed when you come to finish this story (coz thats important). I'm waiting here for the update...sitting by my computer... mayber another hour or two will do it...

OMG wehen are you going to update do you like torture huh huhhuhhuhuhuhuh? *sobbing* plz update if it was because i didnt review last time its probably because slow old me *ignoring horrible snickkers* didn't know how to. Don't leave me hanging maaaaannnnn. *watery smile* and *snarling* UPDATE

my sister is pathetic (AMAZED) forgive her idioticy. Just update she would be less likely to insult or threaten anybody that way. =) p.s update

my sister is pathetic (AMAZED) forgive her idioticy. Just update she would be less likely to insult or threaten anybody that way. =) p.s update

your hevi hevi hevi hevi heve! UPDATE SOON ! .... PLEASE :)

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH do i detect a hint of trouble 4 our young lurvers?

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umph ... sori. GREAT STORY!

Very well done with the lemon.

I am glad that the two of them tricked Gohan. I wasn\'t really looking forward to a fight between the two brothers.

I think the underground cave was interesting. I hope maybe there will be a little more detain into how Tifia (sorry about the spelling) knew it was there.

haha...now you\'re just teasing us. Damn those Saiyan hormones. I\'m wondering how the other Saiyans will react when they find out about Goten\'s mate. I think Vegeta would most likely approve, but I don\'t have any guesses as to what the others might say.

Update again soon.

Well, I guess a teenaged demi-sayian going into rut is going to think about sex first and realtioship type emotions second... or maybe somewhere in the top ten. (One can only hope)

Poor Tifa, I hope she really understands what she\'s getting herself into. I don\'t know if Goten is going to think about being a teenaged parent and still trying to graduate. *shrugs*