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My god... Trunks is SUCH a bastard!! I mean of course I knew this from the very first paragraph of the very first chapter, but for some reason his interaction with Bejiita in chapter 18 just epitomized his asshole-ness for me. Trunks never seemed as offensive and audacious as he does when jeering his father about what he thinks he SHOULD have done with Gokuu years ago. It actually hurt ME to read that. I guess I can only imagine what Jiita must have felt hearing it. ><

Really well done story. This chapter especially. Reading Strong Heart always manages to make me incredibly angry. Which is almost impossible to do, as I almost NEVER get angry about anything, ever. Don't take it the wrong way, I love the story of course. It manages to pull emotions from me that I'd hardly feel otherwise. I guess that makes you a bit of a genius then, hmm?

yer pal
-Rena

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Thank gods – you kept Vegeta. I already was scared that Vegeta might go all the way - would have been such a disappointment.

Trunks is gonna be pissed… Oh, how he’s gonna be pissed. He almost got it and then… "It'd be like fucking a dead body…" I wondered if Trunks will get upset, maybe even sad and think of it. Though, nah, probably he’ll only get pissed and will pester Vegeta even more.

Gosh, loved this chapter! Truly, truly loved!

I pity Trunks, I really do. Who was he trying to punish, back there? Vegeta or himself? Or may be the both of them?

Is it obsession, or is it addiction, or both? I bet Trunks has given up on *himself*, right? He gives Vegeta priority over fucking Mirai, why is that? Is it because, unlike Mirai, Vegeta was once like himself, heartless, unrestricted, and now isn't anymore? Is Trunks trying to prove that people like himself and his father really don't change?

What kind of act of betrayal did Vegeta do against his son, to make him so obsessed with him? Was Vegeta the obsession Trunks insinuated he and Mirai truly shared? Or does Trunks feel unloved cause his father always "pretended" to care for him at least by human standards, like Bulma nagged at him to, but never showed pride in him as a saiyan? As a hybrid?

Oh, wait, wait, I got it! Human blood and saiyan blood mix makes the child a lunatic! I knew all the hybrids of DBZ were nuts!!! Look at Gohan dressing as Saiyaman, just look at him! *Jumps up and down in happiness at having found the answer to the mystery*

Trunks is starting to make ME bored... All those "sensible" speeches and ranting when all he really is full of is empty words that don't mean anything. I'm waiting patiently for the explanation that will give them meaning... 8Cause I don't recall reading the letters PWP, "Plot What Plot?" in your summary.

To put it midly, Ive been having my fair share of hardships lately, in REAL LIFE I mean, hope they're finally over, and Trunks is trying my emphaty limits. If in the next chapter he still hasn't cut with the whinning shit, I suggest you focus on the other characters and show that poor baby what it is to be taken off the spotlight.... He thinks himself so damn special, I'm about to vomit here.

So Mirai failed in showing him he isn't special... Why doesn't he make Trunks meet players, hookers, giggolos...People who sell their bodies, in a sense, like Trunks? Would that show him how alienating that kind of activity can be? Who are the prostitutes that work because they need to feed their families sacrificing themselves, and who are the ones that live that life cause they're twisted and/or don't know any way out of that life or that there is another possible way of living?

Well, I guess both MT and Trunks have something to think about from their visits to Susan and David. Everything MT pointed out was obvious, but when Trunks turned the tables... ah, that was classic.

O.o That was getting a little hot and heavy there between Vegeta and Trunks. How very interesting that Vegeta would go that far only to stop. Hm... wonder what he's trying to prove and who he is trying to prove it to. His last statement was great!

Now I have to wonder what Vegeta's real thoughts and feelings are on the subject of 'Kakarott.' I don't know if those will ever be exposed in this format of a story. *sighs*

Great job as usual! LOL... your comments in the beginning of this chapter were fun! X's without the O's.

P.S. Or maybe Vegeta wanted to remember what it felt like not to be caged up? Let the dark side out just for a moment?

I am not really certain if Trunks could actually handel that version of Vegeta, even though he may think he can.

I don't think Trunks realized how close he came to an abrupt end. *shrugs*

Trunks is more bothered than he'd like to admit. And Vegeta got him good.

I can't wait to read what happens next!

Keep it up.

My. God.

I love this fiction...I can't believe i waited so bloody long to read it...

wow that is intensce

I'm not going to lie to you for the sake of complimenting: I don't like where this story is heading. While I don't normally use such tired and worn out stereotypes when comment on work that you probably spent a very long time on, chapter 17 just felt... emo. It didn't go well with the rest of the story at all. I'm sorry, I don't like it.

I believe we are all just a little bit more fucked up as a result of reading that chapter. Again I say whoa