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Ha ha! The new organization of the site has allowed me to review this! I never could find the damned review button before now. Anyways... To the point.
I love this story, it\'s amazing. I was so worried it would never have another update, so happy when I saw the new chapters. I\'m not sure where it\'s going right now, which is usually a good thing, although this latest chapter seems a little less... Refined than usual. Your early chapters set a very high bar, and I\'m not sure if chapter 14 was quite there... But that\'s just a thought, it will always be a good story, so long as you\'re writing it. =P
Any chance of updating certain other stories....? ^.~

I love this story, and I\'m enamored with your writing ability. It is very fluid and very poised. I\'m intensely enjoying this story! Great job!

True Genius. This story touches my heart and mind in a way only Monster by Camaro did... both different lessons, but both mystically haunting. Props to this author and hope that they update soon.

you need to put a disclaimer on your fic before they delete it. It would be a shame to lose your fic and all of your reviews on this site for such a little thing.

Oh my... What is Mirai doing there? I bet that wasn\'t the response he was hoping for when he went in search of Gohan.

Hm.... Looks like Trunks has a lot of reflecting to do. Even though Susan opened her eyes, and he could tell that she wasn\'t \'all there\', it probably brought up more questions than it answered to have her wake up and look at him.

Did you check the hit count? I think some people may have been too shocked to actually make a comment on the last chapter. There was certainly more than enough to think about, let alone have already formed thoughts on. (enough to make a comment/reveiw)

Excellent job. I can\'t wait to see what Gohan\'s response is going to be to having Mirai show it. It may very well depend on what Mirai\'s motivations are for being there in the first place.

It\'s amazing how drastically you can change the mood of the fic but have it flow together so seamlessly. It went from being rauchously sexual to unbearable sadness in a heartbeat. I feel quite sad now. not pity for the girl, just sad that things like that really do happen. And while I suppose Trunks could easily seen the whole senario as an example of hate instead of love, it seems like he\'s really understanding. I was wondering how you planned to get a \"heartless\" person to feel. This example you chose was rather unexpected, but so is the rest of the fic. Always keeping us guessing!

To make a long story short, it\'s fabulous.

P.S. just dying to know what\'s going to happen now that Gohan\'s back in the picture.

That doesn\'t mean no one else liked it. It just means some were too lazy to review. This chapter was good too. A little short, but good. I must admit, I wanted to stop reading when I saw the way you portrayed Trunks, but it\'s turning out to be better than I thought. I\'m glad I read it through.

As usual, wonderfully written!

The way you described the Trunks\' thoughts and the appearance of the hospitalized girl... wow.

You have a real talent. Keep it up.

i like this story very much and am intrigued by every character twist. please continue.

i rather like your story, and i\'m looking forward to seeing how this ends.