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breath taking, absolutely beautiful. it brought a tear to my eye. i love this chapter.

As usual, this chapter is very thought provoking. (sorry about my spelling) That was a very tough lesson plan Mirai had for Trunks this time. I wasn\'t expecting it either, really, for some reason I thought for certain Mirai was going to try to show Trunks some lovey-dovey couple. (And that certainly would have failed.) I am glad Mirai is smarter than that. And I am glad Susan\'s story was able to move Trunks, even if it was just a tad bit, and certainly against his will.

Excellent job as usual. Glad to see you are back.

Well written.

So the monster has feelings after all. I hope Marai wins.

Sheesh again with the cliff hanger torture when are you going to give us more? I am not sure wheter I want Mirai to succeed or fail.
Poor Goten he still obviously loves Trunks but knows that Trunks no longer wants him. Heck they barely seem to still be friends this is not good. But then again more please!!!

Nutsy the one and only

It\'s been a while since I\'ve reviewed ya, huh?

This story scares me and opens my eyes at the same time. It scares me because I have to face facts and realize that the world is cold and harsh and I have to deal with the fact that love isn\'t always what a person thinks it is...nor is it always enough.

And I may be off at what you\'re getting at with this story but I am learning something and I am growing from this fic. I\'m learning of self-love, no matter what flaws I have. Before, I thought differently and I didn\'t want to accept myself as I am; I thought I needed someone to complete me and make me at home with myself...

Trunks is liberal while Mirai seems to be more converservative but desirable. Maybe Trunks want to fuck the more innocent version of himself for more than the glory. Anyways, great job (though I KNOW I\'ll have to re-read this at least five times before I can get a clearer grasp of it) You know how to bind people, girl.

Love ya,
Shay

O_O Damnnn.

Jesus Christ. Goddamn. Wow, just...wow. I think that this is the best Trunks/Goten story I\'ve ever read in my life. It\'s wicked and dark as hell and that\'s how I love them. The big surprise for me was the Goku thing on the graveyard. Brilliant. Fucked up and so evil that I nearly cried for Goku (loved the mentionned . G/V) Now, I know I worship a lot of fanfictions writers but I think you made it in the God/Goddess category and you\'re the one one in it. You need to write more stories. Sorry for all the ass-kissing and worshipping but it kicked ass and I\'m reviewing for 12 chapters so... Keep updating and I\'ll I keep reviewing.

I don\'t know how in the heck I missed this update, but I obviously did.

Hmmmm, I wonder what the gadget Bulma is missing is and does. That would probably be a good start as to who took it.

I thought for a moment, \"This is it,\" Miria was going to give in. I have to say, that young man has a whole lot more fortitude than I do.

Yep, Goten is certainly a touchy subject.

O.o Now there is an interesting challange. I hope Miria can pull it off, but I have a feeling Trunks is going to gain-say anything he comes up with.

Interesting fic. Keep it up

MIRAI BETTER WIN DAMNIT!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!

This story is developing so nicely! And Trunks is such an interesting character, the present and future Trunks. Even though they\'re the same person, it\'s still so obvious that they\'re not the same. And you\'re picking them both apart at a nice pace. *grin* I can\'t wait to see what else you reveal about these two. I can\'t wait for more chapters!