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god damn you, update already..only to the 11th chapter after god who knows how long this story first started?

Ah, such indignity, Trunks. Such desire for control. To intimidate your own father must be a damn great occupation. Especially when, despite being much stronger than you, your father can hardly resist your self-confident knowledge of your sexiness and incestuous suggestions. It’s an art to get people so entangled that they hardly can remember their resolutions and standpoints. You like to shock, Trunks. You like to see people’s wide eyes and their mouth open in disbelief at your blunt words and actions.
I just wonder – how big is the difference between you and Mirai? How far are you going to push him? How far will you go trying to get your narcissism satisfied? Far. I can bet you’ll go far. Yes, you know too that Mirai is a bit too naïve. That’s your chance, Trunks. Play the oncoming game right. Oh, but you do know how to play, you do know how to shift the game that it would fit your own rules. Yes, you’ll go far. I wonder if you’ll ever return.

The story is brilliant. I could feel a thrill of challenge while reading. Your thoughts and philosophy stand out and are dark, of course, that’s what is keeping us all reading your works – something different, something making us think. Well, maybe I should talk only for myself. Something making ME think. And that’s a greatest gift a person can give to another person. Thanks.

Trunks and Vegeta, the idea alone is disgusting.

But I\'m still curious as to why he does it.

Great chapter! Took me long enough to read it -_- but i got to it! Now onto what i loved. This was one of my favorite lines:
[“Do you still love Trunks?” He whispered, wondering if Goten was too far into sleep to hear him.

“Well that’s a stupid question,” Goten yawned, surprising him. “Like Vegeta and my father, death itself wouldn’t sever it. I’ll probably love Trunks until forever burns to cinders.”]
I loved it. The whole chapter was magnificent. I loved how you described Bulma and how she stunk of death. Very good. Great chapter all together. I missed seeing updates from you. Don\'t leave us hanging.

Wow, geez man...Trunks is like...dude. ^^;;; I don\'t know what to say. Great chapter, and I can\'t wait for more! I\'d like to see some more interaction with Mirai and Trunks (of course, you know, because I love Mirai and anyone he\'s around at the moment). *grin* And I feel like something big is going to happen sometime before this is over. Anyway, whatever goes down, I\'m sure it will be great!

Ah, it\'s been a long time since this story has been updated. I\'ll tell you I still think Trunks is an asshole. :) Certainly keeping him in character for this story. *nods*

Goten had many enlightening things to say about his father and Vegeta. It\'s making me more and more curious.

Hopefully Mirai will get around to finding Gohan and having... words... with him.

Okay now you are torturing us! We\'re not asking details on the sex, but we are dying to know things! Such as does Goten still love trunks even though trunks no longer seems capable of caring? Will Other trunks save his younger self? Will those two actually have sex? Is that a form of masterbatution or what? Techniqually they are the same person but they are also two seperate people...
What scars and destruction has Trunks left in his wake? Why does he do this? Does he care that he does? Come on! Give us more!!!!

Nutsy and Dark Pearl

LUV YOUR STORY HOPE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR STORYS

Good chapter but it wasnt long enough. I think I was done with it in about 5 mins at the most (and still craving more). But anywho, yeah great chapter and I definitely cannot wait for the next.

Ewww... Really, what IS IT with them? Don\'t they have any control? Or has Trunks discovered a way to entice saiyajins to madness. If so, how was Goten sheltered against it?

Double ewwww... I hope we get a good explanation on Goku and Gohan\'s behavior.