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My God, what can I say? This fic has truly gripped me...I think, for the first time ever, I have slowed down to try and grasp every word written in this story just so I could better understand everything going on. It\'s sent me on an emotional whirlwind, in some points, the truth this story speaks about the way things in this world are, a part of me just wanted to close my eyes and escape how cold things are, but an even stronger part of me knew closing my eyes wouldn\'t make the reality any less real, the world any less cold, or the intensity any less. This...is truly a fucked up work of art. The manipulation and anger and hatred and jealousy and envy is so powerful and compelling. Soul binding. This... has genuinely touched my heart and helped me grow. A part of me wanted to cry, before I even read the story, just hearing about it...and I knew it\'d be great..It blew my mind. Trunks, as he should have been continued on Gt. As, in my opinion, he was meant to be. In DBZ, you could tell there was something fucked up inside of him..and you captured that. But I\'m not through, and I *am* going to continue reading this story. I love it. And there is a lot more that can be said about this story but nowhere nearly enough to capture how brilliant the experience of reading it is.

Love,
Shay

Wow. That\'s really all I can say. I don\'t have any words of wisdom or a long drawn out review about everything that happened, but I really hope that you write the next chapter very, very soon. I\'m on the EDGE OF MY SEAT waiting for the next part!

Yep, I still want to know how it changed from Trunks\'s death sentense to sex. *shrugs* Goten may very well have calculated all of Trunks\'s reasonning, but from what I actually read about Gohan\'s behavior... well, Trunks must of pulled something fance pretty fast.

I wonder if Goku was trying to divert Trunks attention away from his eldest, or if the \'shit\' was because he should have seen something like this coming.

Thank you for updating!!! Still want to see a Gohan\'s POV on this though.

More please!

I wonder how Gohan reacted to what he did after the fight.

*waits for next chapter*

... Gohan was pissed that Goku had sex with Trunks... so he goes and does it. *shakes head* he has the nerve... asshole. Very good chapter. Made me want to break Gohan into pieces but hey you got emotions out of me. hehe great chapter as always. What is with Macha saying i threatened you? *raises eyebrow then laughs* UPDATE SOON or... uh.. else?

You leave it there???? YOU are so MEAN!!! More PLEASE

Lets see, you\'ve been threatened by Agent, and given a very awful demonstration by me.... Hmmmm, *BIG PUPPY DOG EYES* Can you PWEASE update? PWEASE, with carmel sauce on top?

*is a slacker* took me long enough to read it- sorry. Anyways, a very enlightening chapter. I like Goten\'s character a lot. From what I saw of him, he doesn\'t think Trunks can change. I just wonder if he\'ll actually try and help Mirai change him. I think it would help. They were friends/more than friends. Maybe seeing Goten again may give Trunks a little push. Wonderful chapter. I didn\'t see any mistakes but.. i\'m not too great in that department unless i\'m out looking for them. ^_~ hope to see an update soon

Mhm... So Trunks came to watch him sleep... I find that very intriguing.

Another Awesome Chapter!!! And here I go thinking that talking to Goten would help, but all it does is dig a deeper hole. How sad, that not even Goten could change Trunks destructive path. I honestly can say I have no idea of where this will be going next, therefore I can\'t wait to see the next chapter! ~Kenya