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Wow. Trunks needs help.

Poor Goten. I hope he gets better.

Wow, this is intense. Trunks is acting like such an ass, but at the same time I can\'t help but feel sorry for him...because there\'s so much probably going on Trunks\' head that other people don\'t realize. I guess. Or maybe he really is that cold-hearted. ^^;;; But I don\'t want to believe that, so...yeah. ^_^ I hope there\'s another update very soon! I really like this! I hope we get a first-hand account of what Trunks thinks about himself...*grin* I live for that moment. More soon!

Very good chapter. Love the indepth details Goten gave off about him and Trunks\' past relationship....and how Goten was somehow at war with himself for wanting Trunks but not wanting to be gay at the same time (in so many words). You may find this weird but I really love Trunks\' character. His personality...no everything about him I find very intriguing. Say, what inspired you to make him this way? Very well written and I cant wait for the next chapter.

I have to wonder if Trunks was trying to flirt with Goten when he was making those bets with him. Now, you might think that a strange sort of flirting, but we\'ve seen how he behaves with people he doesn\'t care about: he flirts like a normal flirt. What if Trunks Truely didn\'t know how to get the attention he wanted from the one person he really did care about, and it only got worse when his attempts were rejected for reasons he didn\'t understand? We alreay know the two of them think worlds differently than any two who grew up that closely really should.

Seems to me that Trunks may have had some sort of pact with Goku and he was coming to collect the moment he knew it was time. Trunks\'s kicking Goku in the ribs was just a little more calous for even the son of Vegeta than a sayian equivilant to a slap in the face. The Look Goten noticed between them in the living room led me to believe this may not have been a spur of the moment thing on Trunks part.

Hmmmm, I can\'t really tell if Trunks was trying to get Goten to hate him or if he WAS trying to make Goten jealous by flairing his ki during his conquests. Goten thinks he\'s figured it out, but I do believe Trunks is a bit more complicated than that.

O.O So, here is a body so similar to the one Goten wants, with a personality he could get along with (in M. T.) Now that HAS to be tempting for Goten, even if he too shocked about the possibility to have actually thought about it yet.

Mhm, so he was happy while being with Goten... and he first pursued Goku among the saiyajin... And Goten and Goku look alike... I\'m starting to suspect something important happened with Goten... didn\'t it?

awesome great going and keep up the fast updates please

Goku and Gohan too? Damn...two of the most sexual purist there is fell victim to Trunks? Dammmmn! That\'s fucked up. Never in a million years would I have thought Goku could have been swayed, well that is without Vegeta Final Flashing him, but I suppose Vegeta knows exactly what kind of person his son is. I can\'t wait to see what the next chapter will be like. Perhaps a visit to Goten is in order? I wonder what happened to those two and why they no longer kick it. They used to be so close...oh well. Great chapter!! Update soon!! ~Kenya

Ooh. Looks like a part of the source of Trunks\' troubles has been exposed, uveiling more mystery and intrigue.

Keep it up.

Hmmmm, Goku after Chichi\'s funeral really doesn\'t surprise me. He would have been very vulnaroable (I know, the spelling sucks *shrugs*) at that particular time. I am just disappointed Vegeta didn\'t step in to fill that role, but obviously, Vegeta understood what \'grief\' meant, and wasn\'t willing to attack when Goku was weak. Vegeta never has or would. (well, unless of course you are writing an AU, then all bets are off.)

Now, Gohan going to murder Trunks for it and falling prey to that sexy bastard? Now that is just interesting. I think I\'d really like to see Gohan\'s POV about what happened, even if it happens to be Trunks\'s retelling of it.

Hmmmm, I do really have to wonder at Goten\'s fortitude. How did he stay ammune? What happened? *nods* Yep, something I\'d like to see the answers for, answers YOU have to write.

Excellent chapter. Thanks for keeping the updates so regular. I really LOVE this story.

hm.. so it seems maybe Trunks does have a weakness.. Goten. Four years... I think the only way Mirai can really get Trunks to change would be through Goten.
Very good chapter- no surprise there. I esspecially love this fic because it\'s easy to follow. No 10 pages of writing and hopeing the next update will be soon so the reader will actually remember what was going on. Thanks for that. Great chapter and i will be waiting for an update