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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...I must say that this is some of the best shit I\'ve read in a long time! The way you portray the emotions in this story is phonomenal...I\'m impressed. Good job! I await the next chapter impatiently....
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhh!! The tension between these two is just....!!!!!!! SQUEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! I live for fics like this! ^___^
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE ADD GOHAN IN TO THIS
THRESOMES ARE GOOD
BELLA
THRESOMES ARE GOOD
BELLA
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. this chapter actually reminded me of a song. hehe -_- lame yeah.
I feel badly for Mirai, I just don\'t think Trunks will change.... maybe if he does experience love such as falling in love with Mirai or something he might change. Of course, he\'d had to let himself fall in love and that will be hard because of the fact he doesn\'t believe in love. I love everyone\'s shocked faces when they see both of them. hehe it\'s the this is Mirai then Red basically said hey let\'s fuck. hehe Very rad chapter as always. I guess Macha\'s review got to you. She beat me to it too... next time thou.. she won\'t BUHAAHA anyways, wonderful chapter and i hope to see an update soon
I feel badly for Mirai, I just don\'t think Trunks will change.... maybe if he does experience love such as falling in love with Mirai or something he might change. Of course, he\'d had to let himself fall in love and that will be hard because of the fact he doesn\'t believe in love. I love everyone\'s shocked faces when they see both of them. hehe it\'s the this is Mirai then Red basically said hey let\'s fuck. hehe Very rad chapter as always. I guess Macha\'s review got to you. She beat me to it too... next time thou.. she won\'t BUHAAHA anyways, wonderful chapter and i hope to see an update soon
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Marai has quite a challenge. Trunks probably won\'t care untill Marai leaves for his own timeline.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Titus and Aries huh? *winks* hahahahahahahahah.... *clears throat*
Anyway, I still have to say that I think Miria made a HUGE mistake by going to the club with Trunks. I am very happy he was able to resist, but still, I don\'t think he should put himself in positions that make him have to choose. Way too dangerous.
Poor Trunks *sighs sadly* I really do want to know what happend to him to make the decisions he has. Even Vegeta isn\'t that narotic. (sp?)
I did like Miria\'s reaction to Red\'s attention. *grins* I knew he\'d like that kind of attention.
Anyway, I still have to say that I think Miria made a HUGE mistake by going to the club with Trunks. I am very happy he was able to resist, but still, I don\'t think he should put himself in positions that make him have to choose. Way too dangerous.
Poor Trunks *sighs sadly* I really do want to know what happend to him to make the decisions he has. Even Vegeta isn\'t that narotic. (sp?)
I did like Miria\'s reaction to Red\'s attention. *grins* I knew he\'d like that kind of attention.
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this alot. I\'m gonna have to check everyday to see if you updated this or not. M. Trunks is my favorite character out of everyone. I\'m glad that he and Chibi will get \'along\' well together. Will you get Mirai to train with Vegeta? Just so Chibi can see him half-naked and sweating. lol VERY nice image though. I hope to be able to read more soon though. It\'s really too good to stop now. =^-^=
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. Do you know how terrible it looks for a person 30+ yr. to be on the floor throwing a tantrum, kicking and screaming?
Of course, now if you are really sadistic, you won\'t update because of the halarious mental image I have just given you. :)
Of course, now if you are really sadistic, you won\'t update because of the halarious mental image I have just given you. :)
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh fabulous! I\'m so in love with this story, it\'s just so... so... Evil! Evil, great, intriguing, excellten story idea, all that good stuff, I can NOT WAIT for the next chapter, Christ this is the best thing I\'ve read in ages, so looking forward to your next chapter. I wonder if it\'s really something wrong with Trunks\' brain that makes him act the way he does, and if so, what caused it? A spar with his father perhaps? Mental Trauma? Can\'t wait to find out!
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Urgh, so much self love it makes me puke... O_o
One thing, it would have been better if they had both called each other \"Trunks\"... And then Present Trunks can start calling Mirai \"Trunksie-po\", \"Tru-chan\", or definitely Trunks-koi (koi means \"sweetheart\" in japanese)... And phrases like \"Hey there, Sexy\", or \"Oh, babe... can\'t wait to find out if *I* scream when I come in multiple orgasms\" (he\'s always been seme so he wants to know what he would do if he were uke?)...
Hehe, those are fun. ^_-
One thing, it would have been better if they had both called each other \"Trunks\"... And then Present Trunks can start calling Mirai \"Trunksie-po\", \"Tru-chan\", or definitely Trunks-koi (koi means \"sweetheart\" in japanese)... And phrases like \"Hey there, Sexy\", or \"Oh, babe... can\'t wait to find out if *I* scream when I come in multiple orgasms\" (he\'s always been seme so he wants to know what he would do if he were uke?)...
Hehe, those are fun. ^_-