rate_review Reviews

A very deep and meaningful story. Well descriptive, developed, and overoll well written. The characters through out, at least future trunks, and Vegeta, are well in character. Obviously the young trunks is not because if he was IC there wouldn't be a story. Yet, i find it quite believable that the young trunks would feel pressured and annoyed about the future trunks righteous actions and chouldn't live up to them. I think you did get something going there which really was IC. Also, i enjoyed that this story was about both of the hot purple haired youths. I think you caught something interesting in their personalities and they are very much not dull. Although, for some reason i still find the young trunks a bastard no matter how much he apologies to Goten. For you made me believe, with numerous examples, that Trunks was just a unfeeling ass hole. hehe. For some reason the examples of being cruel to people were more realist to me then the good examples that changed him. Although, a good transition from "bad" character to "good" character because it wasn't very sudden and it took time for Trunks to start feeling something. I am looking forward to more of your stories in the future; this was a pleasure to read.

A brilliant work of art from whom I would expect no less. I've missed you, that's for sure. And I told you I would get around to reading this since I knew it would be worth it. I never lie when I promise to those I care about. Your writing skills, as always, amaze me with their ability to instill the likes of me with compassion or sympathy or hatred or love. If you believe it, I was almost trying to talk to Goten during Chapter 25 to get him to realize that Trunks has changed. Though my own ambition for fanfics has dwindled over the years, I shall never forget what it was that brought us together in this world, which has ever only been words. Our words, though some people may forget, we shall always remember. And I hope that to this day, you still remember me as your brother as I still embrace you as my sister.

-Martek

Wow, what an incredible and painful story. I am at a loss for words. Painful and magnificent.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG...THAT WAS GOOD. I enjoyed every minute of the story from Susan, to Dave, to the Holocaust Lovers...I loved it all. I loved the details you added and I would like to know if you have a predesposed view on how you wanted this story to come out or if you set it up step by step

P.S. I *HEART* U!!!

ummm sorry I was that last anon...the one who started with the *omgomgomgomg..etc.* I'm a little slow so bare with me...hehehehe...I forgot to put my name so yeah here it is Serenity James and you can reach me at briandjusforever@yahoo.com

Gotta say it. FUCKING FANTASTIC! That was the most... I can't even find the right words (besides 'FUCKING FANTASTIC') that are powerful enough to describe it! I read pretty much the beginning to chapter 24 and, oh my god! I cried so hard. I was on the phone to my friend for ages after, just sobbing! (She loved this fic too)... Anyway. Then you up-dated and you ended it like that and the tears just wouldn't stop! I dwelled on it for ages. But now, I'm over it (the crying) and now every once in a while I'll think about it and just grin 'cause their soo hot *drools*.

I must admit, I didn't entirely understand the end at first, but that didn't matter. 'Cause it was just soo well written that it didn't matter that I was too stupid to figure it out... The explanation really helped. Thanks for thinking of those who don't 'read between the lines'...

Anyway, just got to say again, that that was fantastic and 'Strong heart' is THE MOST beautiful and now my most favourite fic in the world!! You are amazing!

I read it again. Yup. From start to beginning.

You are amazing, Camaro. Simply fucking amazing. People fight so hard against things they don't understand until they are explained to them in ways that they can comprehend.

Isn't that just the way of things?

Thank you so much for this explanation of love. Maybe we should all be more careful when we say the words. They mean a lot more to me now.

BG

LOL. You know, I was wondering if you were going to reveal who Todesengel was or not. I'm glad that you decided to. I also appreciated your explanation, as I had not caught onto that moment between Mirai and Gohan before. Of course, I thought Mirai was alive when I first read that chapter. Now, I'm going to go back and reread this story and see what else I missed. Anyway, I look forward to more of Monster 2 and Perfection. Later!

Camaro,
I know i just reviewed recently, but there was some more stuff that i wanted to say (In reading this review i appologise for grama and spelling errors ^_^.... i know that your very good at english, and it will most likely annoy you ^_^)
Reading that explanation really helped, i had so many crazy ideas running through my head... like i was thinking that the reason he was there was for 'unfinished buisness', well i guess its pretty similar if not the same.... When i first read the bit where someone took Trunks' chair right out from under him.... i was like "OMG, is Trunks imagining everything??!?!?!" but then i thought but everyone else was talking to him...So in this case your explanation super helped!!!
Sumthing else i wanted to say was, that i was reading through the reviews for Monster, and i noticed sum girl saying that she finally found a person whos a better writer than you..'Todesengel' claiming that'Todesengel' was unmatched or sumthig..... absolutely HILARIOUSE!!! hahahahahaha
NEways, as i said in my last review, you are a beautiful wrter, and i believe that you should write an original novel!! (thats if you dont already!!) I know id buy it!!
Well, newho, best be off.
Wish yuo all the best with your writing and your life!! ^_^
And i truely congradulate you for finishing the masterpiece! it was truely magnificent!
Later Dayz....Hope to chat with ya one day!! ^_^
Luv ya lots!!
Cassie

OMG!!!! I'M BAWLING HERE!! THE LAST CHAPTER WAS SO MEAN!!! HE'S DEAD!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! :(