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Sorry JayFic, but I avoid Japnese at all cost. Just not my thing. Thanks though!

Yes! Awesome, wasn\'t expecting that. \"Change and you can have me?\" Ohhhhhhhhhh not Trunks is going to have to really work now, no more \"easy greasy.\" I hope he puts that little snob through hell and back. ~Kenya

It\'s been almost a week since this has been updated. *is shocked* a week!! I don\'t know how much longer i can wait... Update soon.... pwease!?

Finally Trunks is gettinga tase of his own medine.

Keep up the great work.

HOLY!!!.... Miria is playing with FIRE. The scary part is, I don\'t think he cares whether or not he gets burned.

I would have stayed in a public place. Safer. lol, of course, even if I were Miria, I would have liked the attention being with my twin image would have gathered. :) (hehe, evil)

AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh. He can\'t seriously believe after a promise like that that Trunks will actually change.

How is he going to know if his younger perverted self ever did change? And Trunks is going to have to find a way to prove he does/did.

O.o Did I read the right? Vegeta either gave in at some point, or Trunks made an opportunity happen? -_-

On the edge of my seat here! I wish I had more to say, but I can\'t think of anything. Just know that I\'m really, REALLY intrigued, especially by Mirai\'s proposal. *grin*

Ah yes, an update. I guess I persuaded you... ^_~ right...
Really great chapter, I will at times it was hard to see who exactly was talking, Mirai or Trunks, but I could guess. That was the only thing that would be mildly wrong and it could just be me... *hear echo* ohkay so it is just me. I find myself laughing and smirking after everything Trunks says. Especially this line: “If you fuck yourself, is that considered masturbation?” it has to be my favorite. I was laughing so hard and I was like wait... is it? Hehe and now... Mirai will give Trunks what he\'s always wanted... himself. I just wonder if Trunks would go through with it... he said he gets what he wants and when he wants it- why go through the trouble when he CAN get it WHEN he wants it. Mirai obviously doesn\'t know what he\'s getting himself into...
By the way, I am glad you don\'t have very long chapters; I find it hard to keep up with fics with really long chapters so thanks. And I expect to see an update soon ^_~ good luck

OH MY GOD!! You have GOT to UPDATE this and SOON! I\'m so impressed. I thought I had read them all, but this is on of the most original ideas to come out of fanfiction in a long time! [not the Trunks sleeping with himself - that\'s been done to death, but his motives and actions] Just to think, Trunks acting like a sexual predator. That not even Vegeta is safe from him. I can understand why his giving his son a wide berth. And now it goes from bad to worse when his future self pops up. I can honestly say that I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Please, update soon. I\'ll bake you cookies! ~Kenya

Oh NO. I knew a confrontation was going to happen sooner or later, but I think this is way sooner than Bulma or Mirai had intended.

?? Trunks doesn\'t seem too shocked to be looking at his mirror image. I wonder why that is?

Curiouser and curiouser.

More, please.