rate_review Reviews

Damn!!!! This is really intersting so far! But your style does seem really familiar to me and I dont know where from. Any hints or are you a new author around here? I hope you\'ll keep posting one way or another! WOW!

Wonderful chapter. I especially loved this line: “Who’s the victim tonight Mr. Briefs?” hehe pick one? Right? So, Now Mirai and Trunks will finally come face to face. This could prove to be very interesting. I hope to see an update soon... *shakes fist* I better see one ^_~

Hell yeah! Now things ought to get VERY interesting. *sadistic grin* I can\'t wait to see what happens next! ^_^ More soon please!

After seeing the intriguing title... I just had to read this. Interesting, very. I enjoyed it so far and found myself smirking constantly. This fic almost seems like something going on in my life. Not in the same context of course... *is Trunks* no way. But that\'s why I kept reading. Your writing style is vaguely familiar but I can\'t put my finger on it.... I do like the fic and I hope for an update soon. It’s a change from all the other crap being written. Thanks for writing something worth reading. I will continue to read and review other chapters so hopefully I can help you with \'constructive criticism\' so they call it... right... I just won\'t be a bitch about ^_~ good luck with the next chapter

Ohhh... Hiding sake screwed. Time for Plan B, Mirai. -_o


My my... Trunks certainly seems informed about his alternate self, I wonder why that is... Had already been planning a little visit to the Mirai Timeline, Trunksie? *wink wink*

Hha... I bet he\'ll make Mirai cut his hair so that he looks more like him, the narcisistic bastard :-)

*can\'t help it. Bad ass Trunks sounds twistedly sexy*

I see some people want Gohan in this... Well, why not humor them? You could make Gohan chase after Mirai and make Trunks jealous (or, whatever he feels seeing his prey being taken away but another). Hehe, you should definitely make things as hard for Trunks as you did for Mirai already.

Previous review was mine... Forgot to typre my name! O_o

Oh, I really hope we get to see interaction between the two Trunkses. I think that would be very interesting. I\'d like to know exactly what would happen. I have my own thoughts (even some nice pervy ones ^o^), but I\'d like to see how it all goes in this story. I hope Trunks ends up discovering Mirai soon. I really do. ^_^

I like mysteries.

More I say. More.

Well, I must say it\'s surprising... I never imagined Bulma would catch on the possibility of Trunks chasing Mirai.

It was an interesting chapter destined to build up tension, though I can\'t wait the moment Miari and Trunks stand face to face :)

Did Goten really kill himself? T_T

Anyway, if Trunks ever had a lifelong friend it must mean he feels *some* sort of emotion, or did he expect to obtain something by feigning friendship?

Hehe, the part of Vegeta being weirded out is great... I bet Vegeta is torn between feeling the royal saiyajin blood has been polluted, thus producing something less than perfection, or on the contrary, producing the perfect heartless warrior *shuders*

Ah, the plot thickens. WHOOT. I am sooo loving this story. Please update soon. (you\'ve been really good about updating so begging is just, well.... add it to your belt if you must... hehe)