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looking forward to the next chapter

SO WHAT PAIRING ARE HAVE IN THIS HINT HINT GOHAN IS THE BEST WITH TRUNKS

LOVE YOUR STORY

Fucking Awesome DUDE! Update this asap. I\'ve never seen trunks as such a bad ass

Narcissism? Well, it\'s obvious, if being inlove with himself, Trunks\' gonna enjoy the new visit quite a bit... O.o

Remember one thing, though:

Goten...

He used to be Present Trunks\' \"best friend\", is he still? Did he ever try to reason with Trunks? What happened to that friendship?

Oh, you HAVE to update..

God dammit! I’m sitting here thinking “Ya know this stuff is so familiar…” Than you’re all like “Hahahaha” and I’m all “Wait, a second could this be…” Now I’m just sitting here kicking myself in the shin over and over and over and over… Well now that it seems that I’ve made a total ass of myself, I can review. Seeing as Vegeta seems to know everything I can only speculate over that father son relationship. Let’s face it; I never have a clue what’s going to happen next (which I love). Oh and the whole repetitive scene with Trunks and Bulma was just perfect. You always seem to know how to do things just right.

Really interesting please update soon.

sue

Intriguing! Colorful descriptions and well written point of views.

Keep it up.

can gohan be in this (smile at writer)

Well, I would have to say that I had thought that I had seen the name Dr. Camden somewhere before, but I can\'t place my finger on it. lol, are you going to give me a clue? If you don\'t wish to do that here, you have my email address.

WHOOT, MT is here. I am glad Vegeta is taking the time to show him what his younger self is like. I\'d hate for MT to go into the battle without a clue as to what he is up against, and still, I don\'t think these breif observations are really going to help him all that much.

I was sad to hear about MT\'s Earth. I guess that since he is here, his mother didn\'t survive either. Watching Trunks do that to his mother after MT\'s has died has got to be maddening.

I am very surprised Trunks would subject himself to this. I have to believe he likes playing this mind game with the Dr. Just another way to achieve the same thing he does with his \'lovers\'.

Oh, I think the Dr. hit on something Trunks would much rather not have brought to light. Nice going Dr.

O.o Trunks talking about Vegeta like that was just.... *shivers*.