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Oh my god...I...I just wanted to curl up and die, that was so heartwrenching. I bawled my eyes out. ::bursts out crying::

That made me so sad. ::sniff:: Anyway, I just wanted to say that it was an AWESOME chapter. Though, my heart hurts lol. I can't wait for the next chappy!

WTF!!!! There's something hidden going on. Vegeta's leaving, and when he does, he hugs his son as he did in the Buu saga.

Gohan knew what was going on, and then let Mirai leave and then killed himself? That wasn't beautiful, that was SAD. *grumbles*

You'd better update soon so I start to see all the facts, cause this was just, disturbingly sad. Life isn't always a bed of roses, I know that, but .... ARG! MORE SOON PLEASE!

Look, I started crying.

This is some powerful stuff. I hope you know that.

I cried.

That was so...emotional, so fulfilling, so overwhelming.

And one just has to love Vegeta.

I coudn't help but cry too... It brought back so many painful memories of my own life... things I haven't gotten over yet. Some wounds just never seem to heal completely... When you loose someone, the world you knew ends, it just ends... and you're left picking up the pieces, praying, hoping to bring it back, but it never does... but the shadowed imitation of what you once felt, of the last time you felt completely safe, not knowing that right then, at that time, what you were feeling, it was perfect, it was happiness...

Cause you didn't know how much it hurt not having it. Not having them.

OH MY GOD, WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT FUCK IS GOING ON! Man, I can't even review this right now...I need a minute, Geeze...wasn't expecting that. Man...I'll be back!

Wow! Strong chapter. Finally they are dealing with long suppressed emotions and memories.
Although I don't agree with what Gohan did with that blast at the end.

I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Wow... watch Queer as Folk much? *smiles* I love Trunks as a sociopath! It's truly entertaining to see him take on an even more extreme role than Brian Kinney! I love how you're not afraid to venture down the path of incest and enjoy it at the same time! I'm absolutely craving Vegeta/Trunks right now for some reason... AND Mirai/Trunks! Then again, my philosophy is that as long as there are at least two hot gay guys together, I'M HAPPY! Please please PLEASE update as soon as possible because I'm 100% enthralled by your writing. ~^-^~

Well.. I finished so far.. it took awhile.. between breaks.. work and traveling.. BUT I finally finished.. and now.. I have to say.. this is and excelent read here... Very nice.. and vivid... I wish I still had more to read.. So I urge you to continue posting.. Please!!

Very awesome... I love it.. It definetly keeps my attention.

Whoa.. that was a really awesome chapter... I usually comment at the end of the story .. but.. yeah.. I am a sucker for something that has to do with vegeta.. and damn.. he really fucked with trunks mind.. Just great.. Just awesome..