rate_review Reviews

so you have four chapters up on this site. Cool. i like the work keep it up

I\'ll try this again!!!

Mwuahahahaah, okay, first of all the part where Trunks is thinking about his speter peaking out of his tent? Mwuahahahhahahahahah OMG, induendo there. (sorry if it wasn\'t meant to be, but if it was... that was great.)


And on to the rest of the chapter. This story is soooo good. Reminds me of Mists of Avalon sort of.

I wonder who Gohan is going to actually use the sword on, is there really going to be a fighter with sword skills that is going to be that formidable?

Yes, I can certainly imagine that the rituals the Kia is talking about would be very embarassing for a virgin.

Hmmmm, Vegeta and Goku are back... I wonder if anything will spark between them. AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaahhhhhhh, I just thought of something, babidi is still alive... Vegeta is back... There isn\'t any chance Babidi will turn Vegeta Majin in this A/U... Is there?

Once again this is an excellent story.

update soon

O.O Something bigger and badder than Buu? AAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

ooohhhh Very good so far! And how unique.. wow, you really out did yourself with this one. Awesome job!

Camaro

YAY, and epic tale. WHOOT. I am glad to hear there is more on the way.