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Oh so hot, so painful, so perfect fic!

Ounty >.<

I almost screamed from frustation here!!!!!!! Oh the drama, the fucking, the ilusion they have to put...

adored it! great job

OMG this ficlet was so powerful!
I loved how they both think they're in a one-sided sort of relationship.
Dominant Gohan is truly my fav in many Truhan fanfics hehe XD
Good job x

Ah... this just seems sooo cold on Gohan\'s part. I mean his actions. I liked the fact this chapter had his mental POV provided in both the present and the past tense. (It was good to seem some back ground).

I know you mentioned that this was only a onesy or a twosy, but I\'d really like to see how it works out, or doesn\'t, between the two of them. With Gohan living two lives, this could just get complicated and angsty. (Which is probably why you don\'t want it to go beyond this any way. hehe)

i liked it, i wish you would right more, freewater! it\'s fantastic!!! and it would be better if it were longer, but anyways i like it, and the sad thing is i could see trunks doing that...STUPID VIDEL!!! Truhan all the way!! great story, FW!!

That. Was. Awesome. I really liked this fic a lot. I don\'t see why more ppl don\'t read it...uncultured brats lol. :P

It was a very good PWP, and certainly not as short as some. I liked the fact the background was after the lemon.