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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I wanna know what happened to Pan. This is a great story, great I dea and great plot. One of the most addictive that I\'ve seen so far. Keep up the good work.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVED the story! It was better than I expected. I hope you put up the next chapter really soon and/or you can send the next chapter to me! No, I\'m just kidding, but I would really love to read the next chapter. You are a really got writer. Maybe you she make a career out of this! Just makeure you read over it before publishing it!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u better make pan be okay. this story will suck without her or the kid. dont let the readers down.
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, but I dont like where you left it. Booo....come on. Geez...lol.
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DONT KILL PAN!!!
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit! Trunks is definetly gonna ascend if Pan is dead!?
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you gotta finish this, did she and the child live or die,? please finish.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t klike saiyans but pan going Super is a great diea. you should hook up with an artist. i don\'t have time to read it all but it looks okay. have fun.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awsome but why didn\'t you update sooner
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome...where are you....you haven\'t updated in forever! Love it! PLEASE UPDATE!!