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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story....it is really entertaining. Can\'t WAIT to see where it is headed.....please update soon!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an exciting and suprisingly cool turn of events. keep going please. PEACE!!!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Curse you!! EVIL CLIFFY!!!! *sigh* PLEASAE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is GOOD! Write more SOON!!
~Tamara~
~Tamara~
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more give me fucking more
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going. if u can, tell both Pans/Trunks and Gohan/Bras story. if not, do P/T. thanks. COOL STORY!!!!!
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I just LOVED the wedding chapter!! Oh was practically crying at the beginning and laughing all through the middle. Well done on this last chapter!!
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update more so i can give a full review. update faster. any reviewers out there that think that authers should update faster, say \"HELL YA!!!\"