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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, the last tow chapters were great!! I love how it is steadily leading to Trunks and Pan mating. I did have a suggestion though. The grammer is a bit off during the dialogue. Other than that the story is great!! Please update again soon and good work!!!!
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So enjoying this story. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. The characters have such a \'right\' feel to them. Thanks.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story it is great. I hope you keep it going and update soon. I wanna see how this plays out. so keep up the good work. huggs and kissess bye.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really kool update plz
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_> They still sound like rednecks. >_> Gah. That last seen has me visualizing Gohan sitting on a rocking chair in jean overalls with a shotgun. Still a great story though. Update it soon, k?
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was very good. please update soon!