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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story!! It has such a great beginning and there are so many different avenues you could take with it. Please keep up the good work & update soon!!!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more chapters please, this should get very interesting. by the way, did u post this story already under a differnt pen name cuz i think i\'ve read this story somewhere, anyways, keep up the good work!
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story, but the grammer is all messed up. You\'ve got Pan and Trunks sounding a little like rednecks. Work on that, and update soon, Ok? I really wanna see what you do with this one.
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDTAE UPDATE!!!! I love it!!
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yah! i totally agree w/ you on the pairing issue. i just LUV P/T & G/B together, but completely HATE Marron. by the way, your story is really getting really good & interesting. keep writing, i especially love the flashback part when Trunks is so protective of Pan & claims her. UPDATE!! soon i hope:)
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked this fic. I liked the way you pictured it. I liked the fact that you had everything planned out and I loved the fact that Pan kicked some guys ass. GO Pan woooo..... anyway you should update soon I like this fic, it was interesting and intruiging
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^__^
Yay! Your going to be posting your fanfiction here too! Yay!! Oh, I just finished reading your profile too! I am totally with you on the T/P AND G/B pairings! And you also explained it all so well and all that! Well, goodluck with your story!
~YukisTears~
P.S.
HOW COUDLD YOU DO THAT TO PAN IN CHAPTER 25?!
Yay! Your going to be posting your fanfiction here too! Yay!! Oh, I just finished reading your profile too! I am totally with you on the T/P AND G/B pairings! And you also explained it all so well and all that! Well, goodluck with your story!
~YukisTears~
P.S.
HOW COUDLD YOU DO THAT TO PAN IN CHAPTER 25?!