rate_review Reviews

This story is really good. I love how you've made Vegeta seem more like an actual person damaged by the events of his life. I wish you would have continued this, I would have loved to seen where you would have taken it. I wonder how you would have gotten them together? Who would've been the one to make the first move? If Goku would have divorced Chi Chi first before he would have tried to pursue his relationship or if it just would've happened in some passionate random kind of way?

Its fun to wonder ^_^

I'm kinda saddened that not many people decided to review :(

I love this story. I hope you continue. I'm especially fond of the way that you are developing Vegeta and Goku's relationship with each other. Excellent job!

i feel so stupid. I didn\'t expect this to be a yaoi, and a Vegeta/Goku one at that (well I suppose it is, right?), yet I forgot that it was in the yaoi category. It\'s all good though, I\'m a Vegeta/Goku whore. Really. So update one day.

HI!! MEMBER ME?? *smiles* But... why is this story on ADULT fanfiction.net now?? Did FANFICTION.NET like.. disable your story for to graphic or somethin?? UPDATE SOON!!!

One of my favorite lines EVER.

and then they\'ll use a ki blast to the head and blow my brains across the wall and leave me there looking like some psychotic form of modern art..with the random drops of blood and brain matter painted in a spatter effect that would cause the best interior decorator to be jealous.\"

I love Vegeta\'s tail twitching. I know it\'s suppose to represent what kind of mood he is in, but unfortunately, I can\'t translate tail talk.

GIN?! Vegeta is drinking Gin straight out of the bottle.... Discusting. *Ack*

Ah, I don\'t think Vegeta meant to do it, but he did provide a very good distaction for the androids. I don\'t feel a bit sorry for Zarbon and his car.

I do like the verse because the androids were able to be stopped with just the press of a button. hehe.... but they left Cell in Dr. Gero\'s labratory untouched. That\'s not good.

I LOVE this story.. cept\' I KNOW for a fact there are more chapters somewhere else so I intend to track them down! Bahahahha... too bad you actually have a plot to this story huh? The fucking piece of shit, mother cunt lickers on this site will never appreciate it. Fucking inbreds.

Camaro

I am glad you posted this here. I\'ve read most of it at your site, but it\'s been such a long time that I am going to have to reread it.

I look forward to refreshing myself on the chapters I have read, and the ones I haven\'t gotten to yet.

^^ YAAY! Posting on here is a great idea!!! ^^ Good luck with this on here! *grins*