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pan videl

I really like this story as far as who should be the next victim I think it sould be Mrs.Brief but here a list of Characters I think sould also be some of the victims in your story you might have to go to dragon ball z wikia to see who These Characters are
Akane Kimidori
Android 18
Angela
Annin
Aoi Kimidori
Bulla
Bulma
Colonel Violet
Cynthia
Ena
Erasa
Fanfan
Fasha
Forte
Future Android 18
Future Bulma
Hasky
Launch
Leena
Lime
Mai
Mamba
Maron
Marron
Melee
Midori Norimaki
Miss Buu
Miss Piiza
Mrs.Brief
Nain
Note
Oceanus Shenron
Pan
Plamo
Polly Buckets
Princess Snake
Ranfan
Raven
Showa Long
Suno
Towa
Trampire
Tsuntsunodanoteiyugo Tsun
Valese
Vegeta Jr.'s mother
Videl
Western Supreme Kai
Zangya

plz write more

Alright, here it is: Your story was terrible. Plain and simple, I don't have to say more. But I will. Uh, yeah about the 'love box' thing...um, that's not like...the way you think of it, is it? If it is, well I'm sorry. Yes, I'm apologizing because you know nothing of the world outside of your tiny, sick, virgin mind. The word, 'pussy' the way it's used in this fic, is not only nastier than usual (and not in a good way) but it makes the story horribly unattractive. *Cough*... A few words of advice: Grow up and come back with some more appealing sexual grammar. That's all. That and it should have been a boy. *Shrugs* that's just me...

Oh, and Camaro and ChiChiSlaughterHouse, love you guys. Camaro, your disapproval of this fic amuses me to no end. CCSH, I'd like to know why your mum told you about King Dong when you were 13? Or should that remain a mystery?

Ummm.... I don't know exactly what that was, but it was hot in a very twisted way. I wish you added a little more detail though.

You know, I read the first chapter and I think that its unecessarily funny in many ways that I can't even describe!LOL Give me a warning the next time it will seem like this hehehehehehehahahahah!!!!!:D

God gods, still lauging!*Chokes over saliva*
O.O

eww

his next victem should be android 18

I think the next one should be a three way with Bulma and Vegita, Bulma being fucked by Goahn, and Gohan getting his ass fucked by vegita.

bulma please