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for Kings, Tyrants, and Demons

by Makota2112

schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I read all three stories, such details, character developments and plot twists.

I know this is old, but is there any chance that you'll finish the last installment in this series? This is one of the most intense and unique ones I've read, and it's very rare to find ones like this.
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved chapter 10 - poor piccolo has to deal with such simple minded nameks (sp)
now for chapter 11 - yay some goten and vegeta bonding! And poor vegeta misses his mate ... i hope they met up *wink wink* haha
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha to think, one would be considered crazy to hear voices in their head, but Piccolo thinks he is crazy because he has no voices ... odd
great chapter ^__^
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow people love Frieza ... though i guess for some he was great ... heck even Vegeta didn't mind him. Therefore i like your interpretation of Frieza in your fic ^__^
Oh i want to know who spotted Vegeta .. mwhahaha
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i love you fic! I should be studying but have no desire to do so ... boo to exams and YAY for fics!
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well it looks like this has become one of those fics that are truely amazing and yet are left unfinished
i confess, i have lost interest in some of my fics and have stopped writting them, i hope this is not the case with you, u were my inspiration for this pairing so without ur story continuing my interest tends to move over to naruto more :(
i will still hold onto some hope that maybe someday u'll get back on this fic and hopefully finish it (cause seriously i know i'd jump for joy, literally and prolly scare my neighbours with my screams of 'finally yes its finally updated' lmao)
this has been the best piccolo/vegeta pairing fanfiction i have ever read and i pray that u'll become inspired and ur computer will work and all that so that it can get finished ,cause let's face it, u left it at a very suspensful part and everyone is dying a slow painful death not knowing what was suppose to happen next lol
hope to see more from you, but thanks for the awesome contributions to the written word none the less
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, Vegeta and Goten traveling around ... that would be interesting considering Goten's personality change
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Long live 18!!
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY for Piccolo! I do have to agree that Gohan desired that .... he messed everything up ... ass hahaha great chapter!
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta never fighting ... i find that very very hard to believe ... it just doesn't make sense in my little head ...

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