rate_review Reviews

I\'m sorry for not having replied in a long time. Had certain factors that popped up, and you are so busy all the time. ^^ However, LOVE the chapter. And I respect Piccolo\'s shredding vestiges of self control that he had to practice. Still wished he\'d ripped Goku and Trunks apart, but I can dream. However, LOVE the interplay between him and Bulma- Absolutely beautiful. And....not to mention. Piccolo so dangerous....The mental images are stunning.


Sheer fact: Absolutely love this so far.

Can\'t wait to see the next installment when you\'re able to put it up.

And there weren\'t that many mistakes that I could see.

Ooo I wasn\'t expecting Piccolo to leave too. Stupid Goku, Piccolo shoulda killed him anyways. Lol I\'m glad you updated. Lol it\'s so funny I check randomly but my heart speeds up when I see a chapter update number Lol.

This chapter was amazing im so happy that piccolo at least beat the shit out of a few ppl even tho it wasn\'t trunks or goku it was still great.
So i guess piccolo is going after vegeta? and just curious is his ship faster since they kinda talked about how fast it took him 2 new vegeta against brolly
Keep up the amazzzing work and plz update soon

sry 2 post again forget 2 write my name ^^^^

you\'re a great writer and i luv this story!!!! please update soon!

I read all of your stories in a mere two hours.

You\'re extremely talented and I would be extrememly pleased to see this story continue. Not only are all the emotions real, the plot plausable, and the characterizations spot on...I just, this is amazing. Simply amazing. The twists the turns the everything. I love this.

I do hope you update soon.

Schwarzwald.

Yay you updated. Chapter felt so short. But I\'m just glad to see something. Lol I hope the next chapters explain Piccolo\'s nuttiness. And perhapas gets Vejiita to come back.

That was an amazing chapter althought it did take long i liked it alot though it didn\'t talk about piccolo much, Anyway keep up the good work and id really like 2 c vegeta conquer some random planet or kill a bounty hunter :)

no matter how many times i read your storyes i still love thema nd caint get enough. its hard being paticent waitting for more but it must be done i guess. i hope africa was fun. caint wait to see more of your amazing tails. truly a fan,
colt

O..m...g...w...t...f...b...b..q....?..!....

You\'re back!!! Yay! And such lovely chapters! Glorious lovely angsty chapters! Waaa. This is the highlight of my day! Perhaps week. That might sound sad but I nearly gave up. But I kept your other fics in my favorites. And My patience has rewarded me! Wooo hooo. *dances*

Piccolo was just how I invisioned he\'d be after Vegeta left. Poor Piccolo. I hope ya update soon ^^ Hehe.