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omg!omg! my pooooor pikkoro! what happened to him! it\'s sooo horrible! whats next? whats next! I\'m waiting for mooore!
[please exuse my poore english, i\'m from poland:)]

Sweet, glorious action. Piccolo is evil. I missed him so!!!! *is giddy* Gohan was sort of an ass in the last fic if I remember correctly. Oh well, I hope Piccolo doesn\'t kill 18 and Krillin though. I\'m starting to like them. *pouts*

*drops the pencil she had held in her mouth*

Holy fuck in a leather leotard oO.

My GOD that was the hottest thing I\'ve ever seen in my damn life. I\'m freaking stunned. I\'ve seen ONE decent demonic Pic in a fiction. ONE. And she writes non-yaoi. But..DAMN. This..this is really freaking impressive. ESPECIALLY when he nearly kills that little tattle-tale Gohan. >< Bout TIME that kid got some damn sense knocked into him. oO.. *is just stunned* I hope your trip to Africa is a good one, and damn sorry about reviewing so late. I\'ve been having troubles on the comp like you wouldn\'t believe.


I\'m...just...wow, Makota.

I fucking love this.

*grinning at the end of the chapter* I smell blood in the water.

This is gonna be gooooooooood. ^^ *gives two thumbs up*

wow ur realy getting even better then i expected. i love readinfg about my faveorit characters from ur point ove viwe. u have a rather twisted mind at some point but it makes the reading all that harder to let go of. reading unfinished work is hard it takes so much time to writte but it is understandable between liveing ur social life and school and whatever elts gose on with you. i have ideas for a fic of my own but after reading some of them from here i do not see how i could ever compeate. u have the best skills i have seen so far. Piccolo is realy useing his full potential now thanks to u and i always thought something would happen between them. Even though he withheld info frome his mate i realy hope that they patch things up even if it means killing off a few others or destroying earth. i compleatly understand why no one likes the idea of goku and trunks. 18 has no right telling gohon how to handdel it. she caint possibly understand what its like not from his view atleast but u r a very sensibal person and however u deside to send this fic im possitive it will be grate. i caint wait to read more!

truly a fan colt

Awesomeness! I never expected that from Piccolo, but I certainly love it. Carnage! YES! Too bad Goku and Trunks escaped. I\'m still pissed at them from UBII. Go Piccolo! Crush them! ...I\'m not sadistic...really.. *shifty eyes*

Update again soon! *bounces around the room*

Its not that i dont like it its that these usually come on a weekly basis and i suppose it didn\'t hav enuf action after the huge events that happened :)

this chap was great and it looks lik a few ppl will be killed off?we\'ll be seeing the dragon soon i bet lol

again, great chapter

Dammit! That was mean! Oh well... I can\'t even imagine what\'s going on in Piccolo\'s head. I can\'t wait to see what you have planned. This is getting good already and its only the third chapter. *grins*

Piccolo? Yes! Reel him in! I want to know his take on all of this. I like the hostility going on between Trunks and Gohan. And 18 is just so understanding...I want to hug her. I wonder what Goten and Vegeta are up to... mm...I\'m rambling. Loved the chapter and update again soon, please.

this one is pretty good considering the last one was somewhat dull(still good tho) since i really hate trunks/goku now, i just wanna c them put in there place hopefully by gohan.
just curious if your going to be bashing them or not?(hope so)

*and tilts head, re-reading chapter* I like Eighteen, I REALLY like Eighteen- a very ball busting bitch. And as much as I really don\'t like Goku, if he\'s happy- then let him be. Gohan either needs to accept things or just leave- but with the way things are going ..eh.

I love how you\'re getting the plot all twisted, and its jsut the beginning.

I just wonder what state of mind that Piccolo is going to be in. I have a feeling he\'s walking that tightrope between sanity- and full blow-demonhood.

Either way..

This is going to kick ass, I can feel it.

Another well done filler chapter ^____^