rate_review Reviews

Have to somewhat agree with Goku, what would Piccolo do after he killed them ... kind of an empty victory ...

i cant believe you left me hanging.... i loved this story so much and it ends so...sad and...enoying i want to know if they ever meet again and if they can become sane again but you havent worked on the story in what three years?
i kept looking at your page hoping you would still update but i dont think thats going to happen is it?
its one of the best story's i have ever red and im sad that you didnt take the time to finish it...
if you change your mind please send me an e-mail i would be more than happy to read it
i hope you will read this message.

lots of love form your number one fan,
iris, rainbow princess

I read Unconditional Bonds and Uncharted Waters on Beyond Wonderland, and what was there of KTaD, in a day, and I have to say I am so in love with your trilogy it's rediculous. I see it's been almost a year since the story has been updated on here, but I know I'll cling to the hope that your plot bunny will be acosting you soon to update ^.^ I have to go read your other stories now, but I'm looking forward most to the next update on this one!

AHHHH!
Back to chapter 7.
All in one night too.
I wanna keep reading...
It's only 12:13.
(Shot in the face)
Lmao! MAKOTA, I LOVE YOU. YOU ARE GOD.
I'm in bed, I'll read more so I can actually tell you something useful and new.
LMAO.

Lemme just say,
Piccolo is amazingly hot when he's the evilest fucker ever.
(Runs away to read more)

OMGOGMOGMGOMGOGMOGMGOMG!
I knew this was going to happen!
I'M SO GLAD!
Piccolo taking over is probably one of the best things ever.
But he looks as if he's going a little... insane...
That might be problematic.
YOU MUST CONTINUE.
I'm dying over here... (I don't usually capslock this much.)
Pretty please come back to us Makota!
Your Over Excited Friend, PC

Hey Makota!
It's me Pooky Wooky again!
I haven't had a lot of time to check with the updates and things, but I hope this has been updated while my computer has been through crisis after crisis.
I don't remember ANYTHING! So I don't know if you have updated or not!
But I plan on reading from the beginning again!
BECAUSE I LOVE YOU.
And I praise your writting often.
Just informing you I'm back, and that you need to finish this soon. PLEASE.
Much love,
Your Old Friend, PC.

hey there just wondering whats going on, not going to assume ur dead like last time lol maybe computer problems or maybe writers block which if so i hope you can get through soon i'm dyin without an update lol, can't wait till u do hope you are ok, too much of a worrier

Will Piccolo and Vegeta ever meet up again and how will the reunion be between them when that happens? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

AAAAAAAAAAAWESOME!!!!!!! My goodness I had read only two fics I can compare the greatness of yours to - "Maintaining" and its Sequel "Quest". Those two also had been amazing stories. My, I was looking for VegetaxPiccolo paring pretty long and then I found Unconditional Bonds... Have spent the whole day reading it (impressive how humans can skip sleep when they're drawn in something ^^) and actually read it the second time over after finishing reading the both sequels. Imagine how awfully happy I was when I read there were Sequels to it...my mom almost thought I needed mental care *snicker* I love the way you describe the emotions of the characters - impresses me to no end, I could never write that way. Sorry, I'm a bit...freaked *snicker* Is there a place left in your fanclub for me ^^ Anyway, I think VxP is one of the greatest parings ever although it's a bit harsh to try and imagine Goku and Trunks together x.X But well, you have to be open to new things, eh? I really really hope you'll get the next chapter finished soon because I'm dying to read it, okies? Would be nice if you probably could send me a mail when it's on? Big pleeeeaase there *g* Keep it up and bring the next chapter on quick ^__^
Your newest fan Amy