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for Kings, Tyrants, and Demons

by Makota2112

person Dania
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I meant to review this when I read it. Unfortunately, I was home where my damned internet connection is faulty at best. I LOVED this chapter, absolutely loved it. Piccolo's psychosis is getting worse, and though I feel for him- he's still a pretty decent badass. I don't blame him for doing what he did to his underling AND to the planet. I like the little hints of the thoughts that drift through his mind about what he's lost.

And honestly. I don't blame him for hating Vegeta, at all.

THAT reunion is going to be an assload of fun.

Especially with Goten around.
person iris
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dear makota

vegeta and piccolo will find eachother someday right?
they make such a cute couple! ^_^
and kami and nail should come back too
that they got stuck somewhere between the broken link,
and when vegeta and piccolo come back together they come back too.

i love the story it was just too bad that vegeta wassn't in the last up-date.
keep up the good work, love iris.

person Mehla Seraphim
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Updated. And lol I love just how more and more evil Piccolo is getting. I wonder if he is really hearing Vegeta or if he's just that nuts. Man, I'm so excited for when they might meet up again. Or when Vegeta hears what his ex-mate has been up to.
person Pic's Pixie
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey so glad ur back, i'm a bit of a worry wart, hehe i was born that way. Great chapter, not sure if i luv or hate piccolo's new persona, hope the hate towards vegeta edges off sometime lol update soon k :P
person Volcanic
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love your stories! Please update soon! I can't wait!
person Pic's Pixie
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just wondering if you're still alive? kinda worried now, hope you're ok and will update soon
person D.J. nikki
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awsome! your a very good author. i hope you keep up with this story cause its one of my favorites! piccolo is the best and this pairing is a great pair i think they were made for each other. So i hope you come up with a next cahpter because i can't stop reading it!
person iris
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE!
dont tell me your one of those writhers that stop in the middle of the story!
you cant leave us/me hanging now!
i want vegeta and piccolo!!!
there my new fav couple thanx to this story
its so beautiful and thought through!
so please continue *puppy dog eyes*
person vegeta's princess
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the story. the plot the paring everything!!
PLEASE update *puppy dog eyes*

faithfull fan from holland
iris
person Pic's Pixie
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH come on ppl review , i want to see that next chapter lol love it hope you update soon

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