rate_review Reviews

Man I got spine tingles with that one line. "If I fill it, will you come back?" Holy crap! Lol. I loved the dream sequence. Poor Vegeta and Piccolo. Man, I can only imagine what would happen if they saw each other outside of their dreams.

I didn't fall off the face of the planet ^_^. I just had a few things to do right around the rim- but I's back now. O.o Wow, damn Makota. I LOVED this scene. You've got such a knack for making things visually accessible through words. Oo. I can just SEE the setting.....though I have to admit, the tackily sewed on insignia on King Vegeta's jacket made me snicker. Furiza in the back seat made me laugh outright. But as for the scene with Piccolo and Vegeta.

Oh.
My.
God.

It literally gave me shivers. Just the -raw- emotion that filtered through. Pain, anger, hurt, just...this overwhelming crush to the chest.

I loved it.... the sadomasochistic bitch that I am, I loved every minute of it.

Wonderful chapter, hon...

Short or no, it kicked much ass. ^^

I am so happy to see this updated and I loved the I love you hate you thing I know how that feels!, thanks for the great chapter.

Oh my, I must say that was not what I expected but it definately shows how fucked up poor piccolo's mind is right now, and I'm not sure if it was a dream or their minds connecting, very confusing but I'm sure it will make more sense as the story unfolds, thanks for updating that was a lovely surprise, and so grisly hehe keep up the good work.

YAY, another chapter. Its left me slitily confused but I've felt that way for awhile now.

I Love The Story. You Have My Hating Goku & Trucks During The Whole Story LOL. Keep Up The Good Work

you actualy thanked me for reviewing?! *sniff*
thats so kind *sniff*
i would love to hear from you^_^
i cant wait to see how veggie and piccolo get back together
i love the pair
its one of my faverite couples
along with vegeta/radditz
^______________^

cant wait till next chap,

lots of love,
iris

The last two chapters were a tad bit short, but still good none the less. Luv the fact namek is being destroyed and i dont rilly kno y :P
Keep up the great work !

Finally caught up again, its been hard with the new changes and stuff, but still another great chapter :) I really enjoy the diversity and detail between planets and such. Pretty disurbing dream for goten tho >_<

I've been a week without a computer, and I come back oo and you've updated. Piccolo scares the HELL out of me, but I can't help but be drawn to it. I am LOVING his newly rediscovered demonhood, and ...I you've just...got him.. perfectly sadistic, evil... and its just hot as hell. I won't lie on that. Just, damn. I wonder how Vegeta's gonna take meeting him. That's gonna be either a battle and a half..or the fuckfest to end all fuckfests. Please keep writing this, I'm STILL addicted after three or four years.