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Another great chapter, whats going to happen next.

I would like an update email.
davifflaelan@gmail.com

hi
i LOVE your story.
i was suprised to see you updated
i almost thougt i sa everything left on the web about vegeta
i.m from the netherland (and still live here)
i would love to talk to you sometime but i cant add a yahoo acount
e-mail or something please

love.
iris

Oh yes please notify me. Lol. I loved this chapter. And I'm so looking foward to where I think this may be heading. ^_^

Oh oh I can't wait! I love you lol especially when you update so fast hehe, and i so can't wait to see what you write next, even if it takes longer i'll wait, this chapter was awesome love that piccolo's demon side has come out, i was thinking something like that was going to happen, mainly since before the merging with nail or kami, piccolo was only linked(sort of) with his father(evil muahahaha) so now with nail and kami gone and the loss of his mate I'd think he'd be weaker resisting Piccolo Damon Senior's influence but again sooo can't wait ,excellent job as usual

I really like this series and hope more is going to come, is there any way to know when a new chapter is up like a group or something?

Yay! an update! Interesting chapter.

Oh please update! I hope you havn\'t stopped this fic, that would be horrible, I love it so much, please update soon

yay you updated! loves you lol, this chapter seemed to revolve around goten, i hope the next is about vegeta or something, don\'t get me wrong i luv the story and its amazingly well done but i just can\'t wait for some kind of vegeta/piccolo action even a brief encounter whatever. hope you update again soon, good luck with the move

What's happening to Piccolo? This is bad! Hurry with the next chapter!!!

O. M. F. G. Piccolo just murdered... no friggin' joke! (UBER-SHOCKED) Wow, the last part... it was actually scary... and wow, HE'S A CRAZI! And his dream has gotta have some meaning... (It was cleaning the last few chapter, no Piccy/Veggie action) (Laughs evilly). Maybe we shall find out next chapter? Huh? Huh? What you think? (Smiles innocently) I love it, you've got me so hooked Makota! Everytime I read a new chapter I'm not least bit disappointed! It's always something new, a new turn! I love it! You shall always, always, always have my support!
1 thing tho, let's not tell Piccy he's crazy again... Something much worse might happen... (STILL UBER-SHOCKED)
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