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o_o Holy FUCKIN' CRAP. That's...oO... oi, that actually made me sit back in my chair and give the screen huge frickin' eyes o' doom. I really do feel for Pic, especially having all those dreams. >< Though for some damn reason, I'd trust the damn pirate over the bloody council. They kind of made me wonder if they were hiding something from him, I.E. that bond and the truth about Neru and Kami (I didn't care for Kami anyway, old bastard..) Morie, in particular- I was glad to see him go, but that's just me and I'm a cruel, and vindictive bitch. However, I LOVE how you portrayed Piccolo losing control. Not only was it entirely plausive, and possible, it was fantastic. I actually squeeed when he did this. Yes, I'm odd.... but I know like only two other people that can actually do a decent demonic Pic... O.o.. My only question is, what happens next >>. I can't wait to see this. I seriously cannot wait...

O_o...I wasn't expectin the chapter end like that lol. Awesome! Lol.
And what are you talkin about? Uunconditional bonds was very well written ^^.
I'm greatly looking foward to the next chapters. That feeling the fuzzy tail was interesting. I wonder if Vegeta felt anything.

First of all, I want to say sorry for not reviewing this when it was put out- my monitor broke. Secondly, LOVED the history...loved. Informative, and not at all boring. I loved how Vegeta explained it, and especially his reactions. I also like that little bit of introspection at the beginning. Makes me wonder if Pic picked it up (no pun intended). Great work, as always.

Alright, where should I start? Firstly, thanks sooo much for the heads up. I actually checked up on it yesterday and was itching for another A M A Z I N G chapter... Somehow ya heard my prayers! (Smiles innocently)
I loved the beginning bit of this chapter... I was amazed hearing about Vegeta's feelings. I was realli sad, I almost, ALMOST wanted to cry for the poor Monkey ball! I think by placing more emotional stuff in the story it gives it a good kick in the pants cuz it's at the point like "Must explain so where not all like huh?!". It helps keep us, well at least me, interested. And the worse thing is, I TOTALLY THOUGHT PLANET TRADE WOULD RUN LIKE THAT! Creepy eh? Keep up the excellent work! I'm totally looking forward for the next chapter!
Your Very Excited Friend, PC

Hey MS!

Cooler is long gone...sorry I should have made that more clear in the chapter (which my beta pointed out earlier but I forgot oops). Went back and tacked on the word 'old' to "Cooler's jurisdiction", hope that makes it more clear!

Thanks for reviewing!

*hugs*

-Makota

Ooooo. So is Cooler alive still? I know in the movies he gets killed alot lol. Oh wait that might explain the dudes Piccolo talked to last chapter. That'd be kinda funny if Piccolo got recruited. Be all good for him to get his aggressions out blowin up stuff. He'd probably look kinda hot in one of those full body uniforms. Mmm

I'm so happy ya updated. ^_^. Poor Vegeta I hope they meet up soon. But not too soon cause plot wise that'd be weird.

I am so sorry about taking so damn long to review this story. I've had some computer problems. However, I will tell you that I love this, though its a filler chapter. I love how you are showing Piccolo's transition. I also love how you display his obvious disgust of New Namek- not...that I can blame him. Overall, very well done chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next..

yay! ur back, well for a chapter anyways, oh please update again soon it was great i luv this story so much thats y I\'m still stickin around, i still check it every day basically and was so shocked when it was updated, i decided not to review till i finished rereading this whole series again, please update the first one please i keep switching the names but its obvious which one i mean since one is finished and the other is under construction which i hope gets going again soon :), so please oh please update them both sooon and please let the ratings for this one come into play *naughty grin* i miss all the namek/saiyan action *sigh* aww well, please update soon! ur loyal fan :) ps. great job hehe

Thank the lordie! I thought you had died! Great gods, I LIKE THIS NEW GUY! And that shorty is cute too (Snikers) Please continue you got me happy today... I\'ve been waiting and waiting for this chapter... Which is amazing if you haven\'t figured! Thanks!
Your Friend, PC

Wooo. I wasn\'t expecting an update lol. Poor Piccolo. And Omg I forgot about the whole Vegeta killin a bunch of his people. Lol. I hope to see an update soon ^^.