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Yay! Your back! Thank god! I was getting a little concerned! Goten will learn in time hopefully... but I\'m more worried about Piccolo to tell you the truth... Jus write more will ya! Lmao.
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yes! i totally agree with XZanayu, but this update was great, i don\'t know y, i normally don\'t like details regarding space travel, but this has caught my interest, i luv how responsible you\'ve made goten, i\'ve always liked him better then trunks anyways. But i am very curious as to vegeta\'s thoughts and emotions towards piccolo still, and piccolo\'s towards vegeta...is piccolo still angry with vegeta? i don\'t know how he could stand staying on new namek, i suppose i just see him getting bored and traveling as well but watever the author wants (u\'ve proven urself to be the greatest fanfic author of all time lol well close at least) great story, and thanks for updating, it must be hard when ur so busy. Just please elaborate on their feelings towards eachother, u mentioned that vegeta has wetdreams about him still (lust) and that he\'s had sad dreams about him too but not much detail on the sad emotions that he feels, yeah so great job i can\'t wait till ur next chapter :)

Its good to know that Vegeta still dreams about Piccolo, but doesn\'t he ever wonder how he is or where for that matter? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

please update soon! its been way past sept. 5th, sorry to bug u (slight blush) but this story is so great and i\'m dying to know how it will end, and can\'t stand the suspense, i hope vegeta and piccolo get back together soon, please hurry

please oh please update soon
i miss this story so much, its one of the best i\'ve ever read
please update it would be much appreciated :P

hi
i\'ve e-mailed you before with my opinon, but i just reread the request and the part about \'Whether or not there will be a collision between the two is still in the air\' scares me! do you mean u might not put piccolo and vegeta back together or am i just going crazy? sorry if i\'m just being a ditz but piccolo and vegeta better get back together or i\'ll cry :( well great work so far can\'t wait till ur next chapter babye

Hi! This is actually the first fanfiction review that I\'ve done, despite reading so many. I must admit that this story is much different from the prequils...but it is written well (though it could use an edit - no offense or anything, it\'s just that there are a lot of words that are rammed together and such, but don\'t mind me!) I was reviewing because you asked about what to do with the story in regards to Earth. I would personally like to see what goes on with Gohan, etc., but minimally, enough that we know how things are progressing. I wouldn\'t do a whole chapter on it, maybe just a half of one here and there when it\'s relevant. The main focus (90% of the time) should be Vegeta and Piccolo. I certainly hope they find each other again and reestablish their bond. I mean, there are no lemons in this story. When compared to the other two, it\'s quite a contrast! Not that I read stories for their pervertedness...of course...good luck in making your decision.

As much as my inner Piccolo/Vegeta fan is yelling for you to dedicate the story solely to them- my brain is telling me \"Whooooa fangirl, slow down\" With Vegeta and Piccolo being the main pairing of the plot, you\'re going to spend a large amount of time on them anyway. However, Would current events on the planet affect them in anyway? And if so, then it would be prudent to have chapters on the goings-on of earth too. Just not to the point it becomes yet another major plot. Then you\'d have a double and that would get confusing and you\'d hate the story because you\'d be doing something you hated.

Now, I\'m NOT the biggest Trunks/Goku fan... In fact, I rather loathe Goku- but we\'re not going there, and fans would kill me. And I certainly don\'t want to start a hate-thread on this thing.

I think, and this would be my opinion- you keep the bulk of the chapters on Vegeta, Goten and Piccolo.

But every now and then, sneak us in a summary of what has been going on in earth.

Your \"meanwhile\" idea.

Because that works, without you having to work out a plot on something you hate.

Or have it turn into a monster.

Besides, either way you go- I\'m still a loyal fan, and will read whatever you write.

Big Fan, sad to see Piccolo so pissed at Gohan, and Vegeta and Piccolo so hurt. But it\'s a great story

I vote for option 2

id prefer to skip to vegeta and piccolo
thanks!