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My vote gos for number 2.
It would jus tfeel unfinished without whats happening on earth.

Um... is there an option one and a half? ^^0 As long as you\'ve got plenty to write on Vegeta and Piccolo, in a sense, you\'re making a strong point. But... maybe 3 or 4 chapters (considering your stories usually end up at least 40 something) dedicated to what\'s happening back on Earth won\'t hurt. I mean, what about Goku and Trunks? This all happened because of their relationship... or are you planning on making them leave the planet too...? o.O

Eh... *shrugs* What am I talking about? Just make sure to keep the lemonade in heavy supply... you have many thirsty readers. ^^

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The story is about Vegeta and Piccolo, I think it isn\'t really necessary to include the going on\'s of earth at this point. Unless you have something in mind plotwise, it would be redundant to include the \"meanwhiles\", the readers basically already know how everybody on earth feels through Piccolo\'s last encounters with everyone- I just think that the standpoints of everyone have already been stated. Also, there is an element of suspense for the reader when they dont know whats going on somewhere else or what is going to happen with the situation- somehow it makes the characters\' interactions seem more sincere since the readers\' experience the same kind of emotions at the confrontation.

However, you\'re a good writer and could build up suspense like that even when including the perspectives from earth.

I\'m loyal to Vegeta and Piccolo- I want to see more of them rather then less.

Personally I don\'t care about the others. Except maybe to see the reactions they had after Piccolo left. But I wouldn\'t say dedicate a whole chapter to them. I\'d be more interested in what Piccolo, Vegeta and Goten were up to.

As much as i\'d like to hear about earth i dont rilly mind and it would be kool if piccolo and vegeta ended up never going back, although im not sure wat u would do with goten :S

i lik option 2 more then 1

Oops i mean id rather c option 1 more then 2 :P

Hey - you know me - I want my Vegeta and Piccolo fix. I\'m not a fan of Goku and Trunks in this story, so I don\'t really care about them. Unless of course, you manage to have Trunks and/or Goku beat the crap out of Gohan. :P

Screw what\'s happening on Earth. I want more Piccolo and Vegeta!!!!

Well, I don\'t want to know a lot about what is happening on Earth, but there should be some type of remorse on Goku, Trunks, and Gohan\'s parts, I mean they should be made to suffer guilt at least. I am just as happy not knowing though, but let\'s get some action for Goten please, oh, and I don\'t think he should go home. My vote is for a little suffering of guilt for the guilty trio, but I won\'t quit on you if I don\'t get it.

That was great ^^. Wee more Piccolo. Lol. I was wondering if he\'d go to Namek. Now I know. Lol. I can imagine that\'d be weird for him. That\'d be so funny if he got hit on too. Vegeta and Piccolo do meet up again at some point right? Lol. I might just be bummed this is the last.