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Good story you got there! But, you need more Goku and Trunks scenes pronto!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!

Again, a brillant chapter... (Can\'t spell, too late in the night, falling a... sleepppp) Please do write more. For some odd reason I knew Piccolo would end up heading to Namek... Will he ever return to his mate? Come on, stop leaving me in the dark here and help me out! Lmao, Keep up the great work.
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The quality and fluency of your writing is superb and a delight to read. You\'re truly talented, and I love this fic. I will be checking back for updates regularly! I can\'t wait to see what happens.

when are you going to update salvation? thats like the best story by you

kinda short but i rilly lik seeing how piccolo\'s doin and hope the next chapter is about gohan/18/krillin/trunks/goku recovering from piccolos attack :P

keep up the good work

*wicked grin* And here we see the veneer of \"good\" begin to slough off and reveal the warrior underneath. Godsdamn, I love the way you begin to peel back his personality, and reveal the kernel of demon within. This chapter is one of the best so far. Its WONDERFUL in showing just how much Piccolo is changing. From not wanting to think about his problem right now (denial) to showing flare ups of anger (losing control) You see his perfect mask begin to slip. It makes him all the more real, all the more tangible.

It also makes me wanna smack Gohan like the whiny little bitch that he is.

Lovely job here. I can practically FEEL his confusion, and his anger- radiating in spikes from his persona.

Loverly.

Just loverly.

As always i loved the chappie and hope you get more involved in the space travelling(dunno wat 2 call it) and hope there will be som sort of confrontation between vegeta and ex-ppl of the planet trade or jus som random person, wanna c him fight if ul let em :S

anyway keep up the good work

Yay an update. And so soon too O_o. I was thinking it\'d take a few more months. Fweee >_< I\'m so anxious to see if or when Piccolo and Vegeta cross paths. Piccolo traveling through space wouldn\'t know about the stuff on the P.A.C. I wonder how this will turn out! Omg I\'m so excited lol.

No fair!!!!!!! Goku is a perv, he should have been beaten, not killed, but beaten. He should take responsibility for all of this. Please, let Veg and Pic get back together, I mean this is all about them, right? As for Goten he is right in his anger, Goku is no kind of daddy. Well, now that my tirade about totally fictional characters is over, this has been a great story, all three parts. I am waiting for the next update patiently.

WOW! This sequel is getting really good. You are a very talented writer and I love all your stories! I wanna know whats gonna happen with Piccolo. Update soon!!