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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Best DBZ Story Ive Read So Far Please Continue
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man this is so awesome....who'd ever think that bra was a slut!!
j/k she's a good character sho often is underplayed....
anyway i can't wait till you write these character scenes:
Piccolo
Android 17
Vegeta
Trunks
though since she's going through everyone you might wanna add - dende,kibitokai,krillin,roshi,and mr satan...
just my thoughts...keep up the good work!
j/k she's a good character sho often is underplayed....
anyway i can't wait till you write these character scenes:
Piccolo
Android 17
Vegeta
Trunks
though since she's going through everyone you might wanna add - dende,kibitokai,krillin,roshi,and mr satan...
just my thoughts...keep up the good work!
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:o I really like this idea. Please continue!
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff good stuff. Its not quite as long as your other chapters but its still good. Oh by the way namkeians are asexual creatures. That means they dont have sex to reproduce. And there are only males so they have the children from eggs in there body. So i don't think you should make a piccolo one it would be to hard to believe that one.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who is next? please write the next chapter of the next person on the list please
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha Loved it! I have been waiting for this... you knocked off two with one naughty
I was just mentioning this today in a forum at FF. We were talking about odd couples
Goku/ Bra came up... I mentioned your story with no particulars... now I am going back to
let them know that name and author... Keep it up I loved it!
I was just mentioning this today in a forum at FF. We were talking about odd couples
Goku/ Bra came up... I mentioned your story with no particulars... now I am going back to
let them know that name and author... Keep it up I loved it!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good to see you're back in action. This fic has potential, really enjoy it. Please continue
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was very interesting pleas update whith further chapters
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely worth continuing, really
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon, it was really good. I'm going through a DBZ phase, so I'm reading all the ones that are out there. Anyways update soon.