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for Deep Circle

by chayron

person Lici
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you...Seriously, I LOVE you.

But, um, do you know the story about 'Geta N Goku and 'Geta has panoc attacks and all that glory stuff and ... I can't remember farther than that. *scratches head* It's too late/early for me to be writing this and still be coherent. 'Night.
person Carina
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gosh! I love your fic! It is really great!
You have written Vegetas character perfectly, he seems right and not so ooc like many other writers creat him.
And I love Vegeta as uke ^///^

Now I'm interested and will read your other fics too, promise!

I think your english is quite good and I am happy you wrote in english or I would have never been able to read the fic!!!

Carina
person kit-kit
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice end
person E.T.
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOOO!!! That was so cool!
I loved the entire story and how Gohan was teaching Kamala all the wrong words that was just priceless... XD
I\'m glad I actually took the time to read the story.
person ~anz~
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL STORY


GONNA MISS IT.

Would have been interesting to see everyone else\'s reactions to Vegeta... ESPECIALLY Trunks\'. :)

^_~ NICE SAGA....CAN\'T WAIT TO READ MORE! ~_^
person Kugatsu
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh ahh...

sequel?

THis was so wonderful, though I felt it ended fast, I would have gone for that Chapter 26, but ahh, I\'m so satisfied. I can\'t beleive I didn\'t want to read this at first, I should have known better!

person Macha
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* I am so sad to see this story come to an end. Really, REALLY sad. You did an excellent job in writing a tale that kept me entertained and hopeful for weeks.

*sighs* hehe, You could write about Gohan and Kamala. :) Yes, I know, I should just let it be.

Excellent job! Thank you for sharing your work with us.

Macha
person wendyghost
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved your ending ! it was a good story!
person Webtester01
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Great conclusion.

Gohan certainly is like his dad. :)

Keep up the great writing.
person Kugatsu
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the plot thickens! It\'s always funny when Shenlong gets pissed for being held up! Poor goku!

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