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O.O Oh my.... Vegeta and Kamala.... *sighs* Well, at least they can be close, even if Kamala is mated to Vegeta\'s father.


Goku got his tail back!!!!! Whoot!

And I do have to wonder how he plans on using IT to help out. lol, I love the fact Vegeta knows he has exactly 12 questions. The sayian certainly thinks ahead, doesn\'t he?

I also liked the fact you said that Goku couldn\'t IT to where there weren\'t any familar kis. Most people leave that part out. *nods*

Once again, excellent chapter!!!!

OMG!! I LUV YOUR STORY!! I JUST READ IT AND IT\'S AMAZING!!!

First i am over 30 and i do like the stories you are writing. I find that while age can factor into the \'maturity\' of a story it is not an indication of the creativity or talent in coming up with a story.

I enjoy this story it is an interesting look into the Saiyan race. I hope that goku manages to help them servive the Ice-jin as I find the Ice-jin evil selfish bastards and hate for them to win ever. Goku\'s self discovery and the blossoming relationship between him and this Vegeta is a lot of fun with a healthy dose of frustration. I look forward to seeing how this turns out.

Ah, I see you have many questions of your own. To start with, I am 32. Probably one of the oldest visiting this site for DBZ fanfiction. *shrugs and grins* I found what I like, I think I\'ll stick with it.

This chapter was very informative for both myself and Goku. Usually mpreg just happens and there is little explination other than, \"Sayians can.\" I like the details you went through in Radditz\'s discusion with Goku. At least I know what your thoughts are as an author.

Radditz\'s explination about the tail thing had me thinking, \"OMG!\" Yeah, if I was Vegeta, and Goku had said that (especially if I had found Goku somewhat attractive) I would have been pissed off also.

I love this story, so much that even my pet peve of tenses is not interfering with me reading it. There are slight grammical errors and a missing pronoun here and there, but really, the content is just too good to let that get in my way of reading something so creative and thought out.

Keep up the good work, I am sooooo waiting for your next update on this story.

*sighs* P.S. If you didn\'t know, I also have a couple of stories at this site. Mostly V/G. If you have the time, take a look.

Goku learns something new... and learns that he seriouly insulted Vegeta.

I wonder if this will be rectified. Keep it up.

god the chapter was great and if king vegeta has a harem is he going to try to get goku into it that way he could have a legend in a harem and be even more powerful.

You do know that you have one of the very few enjoyable to read stories on this site, don\'t you? Dispite your thinking you are unclear, it is very well written. Just sometimes I will have some questions, and thank you for taking the time to answer them.

I really do love all the interaction in this story. You do a great job with dialog and personal thoughts. Your discription of the swimming pool was.. well, discriptive. I like the occational discription like that, it lets me know you are seeing the story. Of course, if you discribed EVERYthing like that, then this story would probably be twice as long, and very boring. I guess what I am trying to say is that you have mixed action and discription very well in this story. Enough of both to keep me entertained, and not bored.

I hope you update soon!!!

great chapter everything was deep i can\'t believe vegeta would get so mad about his tail.

Oooh, more tension. I wonder how they will react to the rumors.

great chapter though i wonder whats wrong with goku.