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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW
As I told you is a great story and every chapter makes me want to read more and more.Besides,I do believe you\'re a great writer.
~Update soon please~
As I told you is a great story and every chapter makes me want to read more and more.Besides,I do believe you\'re a great writer.
~Update soon please~
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how this story is unfolding. Goku may be able to help them after all.
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!! There is going to be quite an adventure for sure.
Keep it up.
Keep it up.
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter i seem to like all your stories i just feel sad that i haven\'t review one until now but as they say better late then never.
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hums happily* I love this story. Your discriptions of the fighting are EXCELLENT!!! *grins* MORE PLEASE.
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey... not too bad. Pretty interesting thus far.. why not email me when you update?
Camaro
Camaro
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting.
I look forward to the next chapter. I want to see what happens when he meets Bardock.
I look forward to the next chapter. I want to see what happens when he meets Bardock.
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story , I think it has a great plot for the beginning .I cant wait to read more please update soon.
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a great story i can\'t wait for the next chapter