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for Deep Circle

by chayron

person wendyghost
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was sad and soo good poor goku! poor goku!
person ya
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damnit woman, you\'re leaving in a ditch here. What\'s konna happen next?????????????????????????????
person chibi_vegeta
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM


well fuuuuuuuuuuuuck!

kami I hope you don\'t wait that long between updates again...jesus...*clutches chest*

person Macha
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phew, that was a close one. @.@ I am glad that Goku got a chance to explain everything before Vegeta made his wish. Of course, now that Goku has pointed it out, I wonder how Vegeta was going to make a wish. *shrugs* Doesn\'t matter now.

Great chapter. I am looking forward to your next update. :)
person Webtester01
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very descriptive. I\'m glad Vegeta and Goku were able to clear things up. I can picture a the dragon being irritated at the delay.

If I was making the wishes I\'d have Vedeno and Kamala transported to Eath. Then wish for a force field around the planet.

Just my thoughts.
person kit-kit
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes everything is alright between them now all there have to do is fix things on the planet
person wendyghost
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this was great i hope you finish it soon!
person Webtester01
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohh! Cliffie.

I wonder what Goku is up to.

Poor Vegeta and his confusion.
person Kugatsu
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...Vegeta\'s up tp something bad...again.
person kit-kit
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow what a chapter

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