rate_review Reviews

I\'d certainly be as upset at this situation as Vegeta is.

I only have one question.

WHERE IN THE HELL IS GOKU?!!!!


Update soon please.

what the heck?? so all the \"flash-backs\" is not really flash-backs but memories that Goku lost?? So does that mean he were involved with the Vegeta on earth and earth-vegeta died with their baby? An that in his grief Goku made a wish with the dragon balls for a diff. life and was end up here?

I liked this chapter. The feist was interesting, well, not according to Goku, but I liked the get-up you had him dressed up in. :) I agree with Kamala on that one, NO ORANGE. hehe

I like both Bulma and Chichi in this. *nods*

The lemon was very well written. I was just as shocked as Goku that Vegeta wanted to be uke. *shrugs* It turned out alright though. (YAY fianally)

But what about this last vision Goku had? Just the couple of sentences you had written down for it made me very sad.


Update soon please, I\'d like to know where that last little bit is going!

Oooh! They are mated! *grins*

Aww poor Goku and his horrable flashbacks.

Looking forward to the next update.

Nah that\'s okay, I can wait.

It\'s mainly very simple Russian, in the sense that it\'s only afew sentences at the most at any given time. I just don\'t know where to look for people to do it... POLISH!!! *Raises hands to the sky* thankyou God!
I\'ve been wanting to use Polish as well but I couldn\'t find a basic translator for it. XD

Anyway, no I knew Bulma and Chi Chi were older, I was just implying how they were behaving. They were acting just like teenagers all \"I want that guy!\" and \"OMFG he\'s SO cute!\" like.
So teenage girl. -_-

wow that was cool its all finally answerd

God, that was intense, man I want to know what these visions are! Are they of the future or of earth or

This is getting so good! I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

I love it! It\'s so cool! Gotta love Chi Chi and Bulma - what a pair of teenagers. -_-

Anyway, There\'s my email.

yes! More! and I have a question...how many parts of that are you planing? It is already 21, howe many more? And will you update your other fic? one with 7 chapters? PLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE! thanke you :*

Sooo fast and CHichi ugh, I suppose she does deserve to be with a Goku if not THE Goku....

Hm...I want to see how this all comes together. Doesn\'t Goku realize he can\'t take home Vegeta because Vegeta is already there?