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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, yes, I did leave the review for your story. Thank you for clarifying!
Now, on with the review... or at least my reactions.
The first part of this chapter, I was like O.O Oh NO... Drama. Yes, there was drama, but thank Kami for Raditz and Kamala. I hope their words will help Goku and Vegeta sort things out.
Now, on with the review... or at least my reactions.
The first part of this chapter, I was like O.O Oh NO... Drama. Yes, there was drama, but thank Kami for Raditz and Kamala. I hope their words will help Goku and Vegeta sort things out.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think things will work out between them.
I can just see the look on Vegeta\'s face (the one from Goku\'s Dimension) when he see\'s Goku with his tail and mated to another Vegeta from another dimension. LOL
I bet Bulma will be surprised when she sees a saiyan that recognizes her.
I can just see the look on Vegeta\'s face (the one from Goku\'s Dimension) when he see\'s Goku with his tail and mated to another Vegeta from another dimension. LOL
I bet Bulma will be surprised when she sees a saiyan that recognizes her.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o What on earth happened there? My review went odd on me... *blinks*
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU HAVE GOT TO FINISH THIS!
i loved the story. the mini vegeta and the little furry snakes are so cute and lift the mood of the story perfectly! also very nice descriptions of vegeta\'s \'perfect compact body\', they make for plesant visuals! *drools* I love the conersations and teasing between goku and vegeta, its so funny even if this fic isnt a comedy.
One thing. everyone is too damn feminine, all the crying and misunderstandings, the mood swings etc. Especially Kamala, im so convinced that hes a girl i have to remind myself ten times in one chapter that hes a dude. I even had to correct that last sentence twice! Anyway i hate her cos shes so close to Vegeta. to close...
Other than that its all fabbity, funny, moving, and heartwarming, so dont make me repeat that first sentence!
Best wishes JJ
i loved the story. the mini vegeta and the little furry snakes are so cute and lift the mood of the story perfectly! also very nice descriptions of vegeta\'s \'perfect compact body\', they make for plesant visuals! *drools* I love the conersations and teasing between goku and vegeta, its so funny even if this fic isnt a comedy.
One thing. everyone is too damn feminine, all the crying and misunderstandings, the mood swings etc. Especially Kamala, im so convinced that hes a girl i have to remind myself ten times in one chapter that hes a dude. I even had to correct that last sentence twice! Anyway i hate her cos shes so close to Vegeta. to close...
Other than that its all fabbity, funny, moving, and heartwarming, so dont make me repeat that first sentence!
Best wishes JJ
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Jolanta!
I just read this story and i really like it, its great! I cant wait for the next update!!!
I just read this story and i really like it, its great! I cant wait for the next update!!!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! GOKU!!! *Falls off her chair*
Wow that is so funny - Goku sounds like my dog going all snarly when somebody so much as looks at you! HAHA!!!
Well, hehe... anyway, t\'was very cool. Might I ask what language you\'re born to? I\'m getting the sense of Russian but it may just be me...
Wow that is so funny - Goku sounds like my dog going all snarly when somebody so much as looks at you! HAHA!!!
Well, hehe... anyway, t\'was very cool. Might I ask what language you\'re born to? I\'m getting the sense of Russian but it may just be me...
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Earth?
Naked?
What a direct question! Squeeeeee! *excellent*
Naked?
What a direct question! Squeeeeee! *excellent*
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow good chapter
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter.
I bet Goku will meet Bulma again.
If the humans were properly trained with Ki and such, they could increase in power over generations.
I bet Goku will meet Bulma again.
If the humans were properly trained with Ki and such, they could increase in power over generations.