rate_review Reviews

OMFG that was hilarious! So cute! ^_^ Vegeta! *Spastic attack*

O.o BTW I\'ve noticed a Typosaurus: Nr. 1 instead of No. 1
Or am I just picking at nothing?

This is brilliant... *wants more*

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

*squee* Everytime I read this story I just wanna curl up and feel fuzzy all over! It\'s sooo wonderful! You\'re sooo wonderful! It\'s all soooooo wonderful!

Great Chapter.

I\'m glad that Vegeta and Goku reconciled their differences.

nice chapter its about time those two got togerther

much, much better with both spelling and grammar! could use some work on your paragraph breaks but you\'re doing better than several other \'authors\' I\'ve seen who speak native english. kudos.

story line is coming along, though I do wonder why Vegeta is blowing hot and cold, and about the \"flashbacks\" or whatever it is that\'s going on in Goku\'s head.

well done, next chapter soon!

YAY, they finally kissed. You know, I like the fact they didn\'t immediately go into a lemon. *nods* Seems so much more real this way.

Update soon! I love this story.

Excellent and so cute! I didn\'t read this story for a long time because I refused to accept this universe you\'d created, but I finally did it today and am glad I did! This is so great!

Huzzah!

well I put off reading this for a while becauase I (stupidly enough) assumed you\'d have a bunch of saiya-jins on earth all waddling around with fat bellies...*snerks*...I\'m glad I was wrong...

I spent last night and this morning reading it on and off and I have to say that, while you have a lot of typos and some really bad sentence structure, considering english is not your first language you have done a great job. I won\'t be so kind to your beta readers who let a lot of that slip through, unless of course neither of them speak english as a first language either.

the plot moves along nicely, I\'ve very much enjoyed the interactions of your original characters and your efforts to keep everyone in-character...even with the language difficulties I found the plot to be easily understood and I like where it\'s going, though I suspect \"Goku\'s\" memory loss is a hell of a lot more than just not knowing how he got there...I sniff a bigggg plot-bang somewhere near the end...or maybe I\'m totally wrong and it is a completely different reality...looking forward to finding out...

and I\'m also looking forward to a LOT of saiya-jin porn dammit...so hopefully you\'ll update soon...

Vegeta

Wonderful chapter.

Things are certainly heading in the right direction.

HAHA Vegeta\'s finally getting the message! XD This is so much fun to read, I wish you could update more often. Keep going pleeeeeeease... *Puppy eyes*