rate_review Reviews

Oh no. I didn\'t mean to make my last review seem like critisim. I really liked this story. I just had a bunch of questions. *blushes*

I do understand what you mean about one bad thought, going to the next, until they all just pile up. hehe, you don\'t have to find a way for a hole in a sock to somehow remind Goku of his children... that is of course, unless you just want the challange. ;)

This, out of all the chapters, is my favorite. I like reading Goku\'s thinking process. I also liked how Kamala finally made Goku acknowledge he really wanted Vegeta. Kamala\'s insight into how Goku\'s heat was differing from a normal one to the fact Goku was looking for a mate instead, was very helpful.

Regardless of the incedent, I thought for a moment those two were just going to have at it in the hallway. *drools*

The truth comes out!

I wouldn\'t be surprised if the Vegeta from Goku\'s dimension would be jeloous of the Vegeta in Kamala\'s dimension if he found out about certain things.

But then which Vegeta does Goku really want? Only time will tell. I look forward to the next chapter.

Okay, I read this last chapter a second time (see, I really did like it!) And now I have to say.... UPDATE SOON PLEASE.

*is having very vibriant images of and uke Goku*

Of course, Kamala said he thinks Goku needs to talk. *sighs* I guess Goku does need to ask some self-searching questions. At least now he\'ll have a sounding board.

Achillona demanded I leave you a review....

You are my favourite author! EVER!

I love you-

will you marry me?

XD okay okay! I LOVE this fic! It\'s so... HORNY! *snicker* You have this habbit of keeping them so in character, even in an AU..... it\'s really amazing. Goku holds no-secrets from himself..... hahaha, he wants it every way. *is innocent* I love how you keep a balance between people being seme and uke; it doesn\'t leave me feeling alienated at the end (which is great!)

Your Goku masturbation scenes are some of the best on the net *salutes*

Your Original Characters are so EASY to love! *salutes again*

You are my FAVOURITE yaoi author- currently. Better update again to maintain such a prestigious title! *smirk*

damn that chapter was kind of sad i hope vegeta comes to his sense and see that he likes goku.

O.O Smelled like ice cream with a strawberry on top? I wanted to eat the guard. lol It was a good thing Kamala called him away to dinner. *nods*

Okay, so Vegeta and Kamala gave it a shot, and had bad chemistry. It\'s interesting how, you can just tell with one kiss, isn\'t it? And then, Vegeta\'s not interested in Goku, but Kamala is, and Goku is more interested in Vegeta than Kamala. Oi!

Where did those thoughts about Vegeta being a better father come in? It just seemed so random. Random, but true in a way.

Update SOON please!!!!

Woah, Goku! My my my my my! .... *coughs at her own antics* Uh, i mean.... *ahem* If Goku -does- mess around, and does what his heat wants him to at this point, the outcome would be that he\'d get pregnant if they didn\'t use protection, right? ...... *cough* That would be cool. Goku being uke and messing around, I mean. *coughs again*

Poor Goku being stuck in heat.

I\'m glad that was cleared up.

Maybe the dragonballs from Vedeno\'s dimension\'s earth or Namek could help, assuming they could get there in the first place. :)

Kamala\'s confusion about the situation was just distressing. Oh, and then he had to go and say that to Vegeta. O.O

I am glad Kamala\'s confusion was finally laid to rest. And it seems as though Vegeta has done something about the situation.

Eep, this whole hormon triangle going on between Kamala, Goku and Vegeta is just.... When Do we Get a LEMON???!! heheh, j/k, this story is good without one.

Uh-oh, those last few sentenses didn\'t bode very well for Vegetasie.