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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
@.@ So many angles and possibilities with those three, and I still don\'t see where it is going.
At the first part of the chapter, I didn\'t think Goku was going to be able to keep his promise to himself to \'stop,\' but after Vegeta\'s actions, he might not find the prince as attractive any more.
Update SOON please.
At the first part of the chapter, I didn\'t think Goku was going to be able to keep his promise to himself to \'stop,\' but after Vegeta\'s actions, he might not find the prince as attractive any more.
Update SOON please.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... interesting. And they say \'Watch out for the nice ones.\' Vegeta seems to fit into this catagory here.
I look forwrd to the next chatper.
I look forwrd to the next chatper.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chaapter im happy that goku has been accepted into the pack though with todays agrument he may not be in it for long.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this chapter certainly was action packed!! Good job. O.O The details into Vegeta\'s victory over Frezia were a little disturbing, but that certainly would be something that would push him over the edge into Super Sayian.
lol, I can just see Goku\'s face after that kiss. OMG.... so funny.
Zarbon did have a point, where are they going to put all of those people, but I am glad it is going to be King Vegeta and not Prince Vegeta that has to deal with it.
lol, I can just see Goku\'s face after that kiss. OMG.... so funny.
Zarbon did have a point, where are they going to put all of those people, but I am glad it is going to be King Vegeta and not Prince Vegeta that has to deal with it.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah everything is going well for them.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The skies around Vegeta-sei are clear of the enimey for once.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i hope the IT idea work
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter.
The insight into Raaven\'s past is moste helpful in understanding his relationship with Raditz.
Last but not least, the last couple of statements of the chapter had me rolling with laughter. Gret job!
The insight into Raaven\'s past is moste helpful in understanding his relationship with Raditz.
Last but not least, the last couple of statements of the chapter had me rolling with laughter. Gret job!
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I am glad to see things are sorting themselves out. Vegeta\'s not pissed at Goku any more and Bardock has welcomed Ravven to the family.
It was an interesting additional insite you gave into Ravven\'s past.
Vegeta being angsty about the \'third-class\'. Hmmmm...
I found the ritual at the end of the chapter interesting. :) I wonder what will happen while making the spirits happy. hehe
It was an interesting additional insite you gave into Ravven\'s past.
Vegeta being angsty about the \'third-class\'. Hmmmm...
I found the ritual at the end of the chapter interesting. :) I wonder what will happen while making the spirits happy. hehe
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked how you described Kamala\'s background. It helps us understand his character better.
Goku appearing in the meeting hall was great. I could picture everyone\'s faces.
Until next time...
Goku appearing in the meeting hall was great. I could picture everyone\'s faces.
Until next time...