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July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good story Not what I'm used to since I usually go to Fanfiction.net the stuff there is tamer but it was still really good. The ending was a shocker I have to say though it was really good. I believe they call that a twist ending either way good job kept me going and reading all the way through despite being sick.
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha i love the ending
"oh FUCK..." priceless ^__^
"oh FUCK..." priceless ^__^
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahah the pink "bad man" shirt lives!!
great chapter ^__^
great chapter ^__^
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor Vegeta, though Goku is here it save him ...mwhahahaha ^__^
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh that was such a pretty chapter ^__^
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor Nappa
ps. i like your fic ^__^
ps. i like your fic ^__^
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked this fanfic. as a matter of fact i would put this down as one of the best ive ever read. i cant wait for the next chapter.
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! that was great no happy ending huh! Then write the sequel! pretty please~!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, i know every other can do whatever the poo they want with there storie, and everyones entitled to there own opinion and junk like that. But well, I just think you story would have been a nit better if you ended just a little bit different. I mean it could have still have been the incredibly evil ending you put it to,… but that was just,.. emoe as one could call it. An I think it sort of killed of your howl story. No offence though or any thing like that. Hope you have happy stories in the future. -Ja
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I... I don't know what to say. That was one of the best DBZ stories I've ever read. Ever. But... but he ending was different. NOT what I was expecting- I thought they would just stay dead at the end. But, then again, I had a bad feeling that Vegeta would suffer again. The Death chapter was so sad- you made me cry! I hope you write more stuff like this, maybe an alternate ending, or a branch-off with the two kids? All in all, you're really great at writing, and I hope to read more from you soon!