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YEEEEESSS!!! *does a little happy dance*

Wohoo!! All the chapters from the previous post are on! *cackles gleefully*

*craving for more*

And noooow... something NEW, brand new chapters!! Coming soon... hopefully. *beams, anxiously*

*waiting for brand new chapters*

Keep going!! KEEP GOING!! ^O^

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*WAITING*

GOOOOKU is near!!! *chuckles, excitedly*

*WAITING, anxiously*

*grins widely*

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NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!! I love it! Can\'t wait to see what happens to Radditz and Vegeta and Napa and everyone....and how Frieza will fit in to all this and everything, ooooohhhhhh.....I know this will be an awesome story....I really don\'t know where this story is going! That\'s what makes it so worthwhile to read!

AWWW!!!!!!! How cute! A V/R! I love it! Please continue....Goku gonna be in the picture soon? And what about Frieza?

Waaaaa! Two more chapters!!... *swoons*

And the big saiyan fur-ball AS LANDED!! Wohoo! *jumps around, ecstatic*

It’s almost there! It’s ALMOST THERE!! JUST a little more... and GOKU will appear! *gushes excitedly*

And then, and THEN... maybe an update to the story?!!... *prods, hopefully*

Keep going! Pleeeeease?? – with sugar on top!? ^_~

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Wow, REALLY good chapter! I was so impressed with how well developed Vegeta is as a character. Perhaps a bit OOC but then, what do we know? Maybe he cried a lot more than anyone ever figured. I for one don\'t know how he would have survived if he didn\'t. At first I was sure things would have turned out ok with him and the other Saiyan (Especially since I wasn\'t using your translator and was a tard thinking it was Kakarot) and when Vegeta killed him I quite audibly went \"oh my God... no.\" it was so sad.

Sheesh.. how bad would Vegeta feel? Good God! Anyways, great chapter. Really REALLY good!

Camaro

God, just when you almost get to where you left off, you are putting this on hold. Please just give me one NEW chapter to read.

P.S. I really liked this chapter -- mainly because I\'ve never seen another like it, and I love ORIGINAL, WELL WRITTEN stories. The only thing I didn\'t like was having to scroll down to see what the heck they were saying. But putting in a new language is making the story more realistic, and I respect you for that. Please reconsider and post one more chapter that I have not yet read. I would greatly appreciate it. I do wish that more people would review this story for you. Please keep writing for me.

Noooooooo...

WHYYYYYYYYYYYY...? ~_~

Don’t put it on the ‘burner’!! *shrieks*

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*sighs* ANOTHER hold-up!? By this rate... when will poor Vegeta meet with his baka?...

*sniff, sniff... sniff*

UPDAAAAATE!! *wails*

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come on, update! its good so far, but vegeta sounds a little wussy (then again, hes seven) whens he gonna meet goku? When are they gonna grow up? DONT LEAVE US HANDING

Hmph... well, I still thinks it fucking ri-God-Damn-diculous you\'re whoring yourself out for a review number. But whatever. Here\'s your 14th. Just keep in mind, when you tell people what number you want, you get empty reviews that mean jack shit. When you let people review on their own, they do it because they want to and will give you more indepth opinions.


Camaro