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WAH!!! Oh this is so cruel! Poor Lil Vege. There are so many fics out there where Vegeta gets raped when he\'s young but you\'ve really got the mental violation in there as well!
Please continue, i really like the idea that Jeice is actually a nice guy, and i\'m wondering when you\'re gonna have Goku appear? When you listed the ages at the beginning you
said Goku\'s age was six to Vegeta\'s Seven, does that mean we\'re gonna meet the lil guy as a chibi?
Can\'t wait to read the new chapter, though i\'m half-dreading what you\'re gonna do to the saiyans next!
HH
p.s. I think you mean, \"breeding\" not \"Breading\". Breading conjures up images of baked goods. Hopefully not what you were going for.... o.O

Good story so far..well told and an intersting way on how things could have developed in the DBZ universe. I am looking forward to the rest of it...kepp it coming

I\'m glad you updated so fast. Great chapter!

Update! UPDATE! UP-DA-TE!! ^O^

Like I said before, I\'ll only have something to add when it gets to the last couple of chapters of the previous posting!

*shues forward*

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hmph! Well, I never thought I\'d see you stoop to this but oh well, I understand the pain of writing your ass off for something and seeing the hits number go up and your review number stay the same. It\'s rude and the reason I left Mediaminer. It isn\'t worth your time to write or to post it up if people are going to pretend it\'s not worth the time reviewing. So while I still think the whole \"I want X number of reviews\" thing is ridiculously beneath you (and pathetic to say the least) I do know where you\'re coming from. But do you know how excited I was when I saw \"5 chapters\" up? And then to see it was only an a/n!

See! You know how rare it is for me to like things! I only reserve that for really interesting stories! So come on, update for me since I\'m being very nice lately! :) oh, and send me an email sometime. I miss our conversation.

Camaro

Sorry I didn\'t review your story. I also read your story on fanfic.net until it disappeared so I already know what\'s going on so far. I do like your writing and love the whole Nappa/Radditz thing going on. Look forward to future chapters. I like how its so original and dark with Vegeta\'s past, that\'s how I think it should be.

Hi there! I followed this fic till it regretfully disappeared off the face of the net. It’s a GOOD fic. And maybe it hasn’t as many reviews it deserves due to the fact that by then the plot had already landed on the Earth’s greatest hero doorstep. Personally, I was waiting rather anxiously for the fic to get to that point... *whine*

Well... but if it is reviews what is needed to get there, then by all means:

A little hard-core but it only gives the more gist to those years under the lizard, and plenty of reasons for Vegeta’s ways.

It’s simply awesome the way Raditzu and Napa are presented, contradicting the usual mad-dog/brainless look.

The in-depth shown in the relationship between Vegeta, Raditzu and Napa and the glance to their emotions is amazing, something that most fics lack, adding to it the cultural quirks decently approached and highlighted, it sums to one of the best fics around.

The few errors in the text are just not noteworthy while plundering through the lines.

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I also have some down regards, few and minimal, but they mainly concern the last chapters in the first post before the vanishing act, and they could probably be thrown asunder by further chapters.

Sooooo, PLEASE continue with the story! The fic is GREAT, REALLY!! But while I can re-read it to catch-up with the story, it’s not the same as BRAND NEW developments, AFTER the last post in the other archive.

*puppy dog eyes*

I really do like your story! Please update!

This is interesting... I\'m sorry I haven\'t reviewed faithfully. I understand your pain. This story has been interesting so far, you seem to be setting up a very interesting psychological tactic with Vegeta, and I want to see more

Don\'t you dare change a thing about your writing! You are one of the best writers here! Well-written chapter! Looking forward to more!