rate_review Reviews

Hey, I do like this! Very intriguing and actually very original as well. Nappa and Radditz together eh? That\'s just exciting, even though I\'ve never had much like for Nappa myself. Ah well...this story is very deep, very emotional so far. I do feel that Vegeta is much different then his 5 year old self in the series but oh well, maybe you\'ll make him tougher throughout? I\'d be a little weary of a 22 year old still calling his parents mommy and daddy and wanting to play in the park.

0.o

A few mispellings repeated here or there but whatever the case, very good. I do hope you\'ll update quickly. This is really good.

Camaro

Looks actually really good. Plus, I love you so I am a bit biased nowdays.. but I would request that you maybe make this chapter into two because if the chapter is too long, the formating goes horizontal and you have to move the cursor bar back and forth just to finish sentences. It happened to my story as well so I had to cut one chapter into two. I\'d like to read this but it\'s just painful to have to move the horizontal cursor back and forth so just chop it into two and your problem should be fixed.

Camaro

Hey! I thought I had lost you to fanfic.net! I absolutely loved your story, then poof! You vanished into thin air and I didn\'t think i would ever see the ending to this AWESOME story! I\'ve read the first few chapters already so I\'m looking forward to new ones!!!! Start reviewing people!!!! This is one hell of a story!